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maksoora
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You convert the one into lover then slave then lunatic

yeah, nice poem

thank u
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not too bad, but is it your poem or you write it down from a book or from anybody else :?: :?: :?: :?: :?:
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What made you feel inspired?
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A good one, Rasheed.
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uhm! I think it's good.too. You're a very good person, like what bambang have said. :D :D :D :D :D
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There's no need to thank, 'cause it's truth.......... :lol: :lol: :lol:
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maksoora"You convert the one into lover then slave then lunatic "Not if you participate love with him .Thank and good luck.
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