CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)
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CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)
HI :D :D :D :D
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)
Hi. What this topic is about? or About what this topic? (I'm not sure about the grammar, anyway hope you'll get the meaning)
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)
Hi Denvinbo!
No word... write something please... :P :P
No word... write something please... :P :P
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)
Suggest me something to write.....about hot news or entertainment.....
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)
Your poems! That would be fine.denvinbo wrote:Suggest me something to write.....about hot news or entertainment.....
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)
Yeah! A good idea....I will try my best to do............
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Good luck! :)denvinbo wrote:Yeah! A good idea....I will try my best to do............
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)
Clouds float gently
Many distressed
Still in the heart
To the cold rain pour
Every night
I feel unhappy
Do you know???
In the middle of rolling dark
Your love like a dream
Blue the hope
Lead my life steps
To pass the bitter
Take away the dark clouds
Funny sun's shine
Sparkling and warm.....
When the rain stop
Our love is out of difficulty
Roll all long night
For the sun shine
So I will happy
And there's no doubt
Love like a song
Hand in hand
To give the warmth
And those two
Happy when they see
Each other.....
In a new day
Sunlight grow up the trees
And spread to all the yard
Sunlight pass through
The leaf canopy....
Wind play with the butterfly
Funny steps...
Happy and sweetly
We go together
To the peaceful place.....
What do you think???? :D :D
Many distressed
Still in the heart
To the cold rain pour
Every night
I feel unhappy
Do you know???
In the middle of rolling dark
Your love like a dream
Blue the hope
Lead my life steps
To pass the bitter
Take away the dark clouds
Funny sun's shine
Sparkling and warm.....
When the rain stop
Our love is out of difficulty
Roll all long night
For the sun shine
So I will happy
And there's no doubt
Love like a song
Hand in hand
To give the warmth
And those two
Happy when they see
Each other.....
In a new day
Sunlight grow up the trees
And spread to all the yard
Sunlight pass through
The leaf canopy....
Wind play with the butterfly
Funny steps...
Happy and sweetly
We go together
To the peaceful place.....
What do you think???? :D :D
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)
You have nothing to say.....don't use the emotion and say that:''I have no command!"..............
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Re: CONFIDENT WITH DENVINBO(YOUR ONLINE HOUSE)
Sorry. I just have nothing to say. :|denvinbo wrote:You have nothing to say.....don't use the emotion and say that:''I have no command!"..............
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