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Post by shakespear » Sat Feb 09, 2008 2:02 pm

crocodile Tears


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win
our life is like a night mare

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Post by denvinbo » Sun Feb 10, 2008 5:52 am

Where's it from??

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Post by shakespear » Sun Feb 10, 2008 6:00 am

THIS POEM IS MINE AND I PRODUCE IT. DON`T BE AMAZED.
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Post by Bambang » Sun Feb 10, 2008 8:15 am

shakespear wrote:THIS POEM IS MINE AND I PRODUCE IT. DON`T BE AMAZED.
Beautifully written!
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Post by denvinbo » Sun Feb 10, 2008 12:23 pm

Good....Better than I used to be.....

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Post by shakespear » Mon Feb 11, 2008 9:25 am

denvinbo ,MY FRIEND ,WHY DO YOU SAY THAT ? AREN`T YOU USED TO READ LIKE THIS ? BE OVER THIS LEVEL ; THNKS A LOT.
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Post by shakespear » Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:18 am

hi my friends I want to thank you and hope to meet in future . Bye
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Re: poem

Post by Vega » Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:03 am

Hi there. I like your poem. :wink:

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Re: poem

Post by Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:30 am

shakespear wrote:crocodile Tears


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

This poems are sad.
I admire people who can write effectively but just wondering do you feel what you write?
You've got a thread of poems here and they are all sad... Why? :roll:
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Post by denvinbo » Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:35 am

That is his state of mind..........

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Re: poem

Post by Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:54 am

denvinbo wrote:That is his state of mind..........
Hi denvinbo,
Yes, I know that. But is it wrong to know? Do you really think it's nice to think in this way?
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Post by denvinbo » Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:38 am

I think he is missing someone........

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Re: poem

Post by Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:39 am

denvinbo wrote:I think he is missing someone........
How'd you think of that? Don' make a story here. :)
You're not him, are you? :P
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Post by denvinbo » Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:43 am

I haven't make any story yet............... :)

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Re: poem

Post by Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 12:51 pm

Denvinbo, a single word could possess a lot of different meanings, to plenty of people with different culture. :)
A word may not or could mean too much to me but this is not applicable to all because we really think in different ways. :)
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Post by shakespear » Thu Feb 14, 2008 12:57 pm

krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks
our life is like a night mare

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Post by Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 1:04 pm

shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks
Thanks.
Maybe I have got no more feelings because I couldn't write anymore. :)
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Post by Bambang » Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:24 pm

shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks
Not everything we feel should be revealed. :D
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Post by sweets » Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:44 pm

i like this poem it's sensitive one
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار

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Post by Krisi » Fri Feb 15, 2008 4:32 am

bambang wrote:
shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks
Not everything we feel should be revealed. :D
Thanks Uncle B. I'll remember this for the rest of my life. :)
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Post by shakespear » Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:51 am

Thank you all of you .Xkalibur my friend I want to thank you too and good luck .
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Re: poem

Post by Krisi » Sun Feb 17, 2008 7:04 am

Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P
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Post by shakespear » Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:33 am

Hi everone . denvinbo can read my thoughts .
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Post by shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:22 am

Hi . We have to write what feel ,haven`t we?
our life is like a night mare

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Post by shakespear » Wed May 14, 2008 8:36 am

Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it,aren`t we?????
Bye
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Post by shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:52 pm

Krisi wrote:Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P
once kirisi said that.
i think we must from time to time remove our hearts from sadness.
i think so
maybe i am wrong but i feel we`d all better do
good luck
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Post by shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:08 am

hi everyone and goodluck
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Post by farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 10:03 am

suffering from woman again
we have to live our life freely

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Post by shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:12 pm

sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx

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Post by shakespear » Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:13 pm

lovepoetry wrote:find poem in here http://www.learnenglishabc.org
thanx 4 this site
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Post by shakespear » Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:51 am

hi

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Post by Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:04 am

hmm are u talking about a person who was indifferent with u?
or is it about anyone who was deluded?
i think it's about indifference am i rigt?

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Post by shakespear » Wed Sep 14, 2011 2:21 am

crocodile Tears ....written by me


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

as u said its about indifference ...u expressed it correctly

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Post by shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:23 am

http://www.learnenglishabc.org

i ddn;t see this site
dd anyone see this site

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Post by shakespear » Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:22 am

shakespear wrote:crocodile Tears


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

i wrote it in the college....i show it to my teacher, he praised me for writing it
our life is like a night mare

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