For my little sister...
Honey bee Isabella
You are so tiny like a white daisy in the field
Mom and Dad so proud of you...
The day when you was born
All angles and wood fairy sing sweet song for you
la la la la la....la la la la la
The rainbow across from the clear blue sky
to give you a wish
bab bo da be bo da bo
so sleep tight in sweet nice
and wake up with the first sun shines
I am still here
waiting your little smile from your lips
And the first time I hold you in my arms
I know you are a treasure of their life
Remember me honey
Remember me
I am a Lady who loves you
.......
By Ladymae
my First poem
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Congratulations with your First poem! Hope you will compose more poems in the future! :)
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Thank you so much
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Well done....It's not bad for the first time..............
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Ladymae your poem is very good specially when you say "waiting your little smile from your lips
And the first time I hold you in my arms " .Good luck my friend .
And the first time I hold you in my arms " .Good luck my friend .
our life is like a night mare
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Re: my First poem
Ladymae your poem is very good specially when you say "waiting your little smile from your lips
And the first time I hold you in my arms "
And the first time I hold you in my arms "
our life is like a night mare
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hahahahaha So, our brother Shakespear here has changed his feelings...Good! :) Just don't forget Babara, OK! :Pshakespear wrote:Ladymae your poem is very good specially when you say "waiting your little smile from your lips
And the first time I hold you in my arms "
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Ladymae your poem is very good specially when you say "waiting your little smile from your lips
And the first time I hold you in my arms " .Good luck my friend .
And the first time I hold you in my arms " .Good luck my friend .
our life is like a night mare
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You posted 3 times, shakespear.............
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Very nice
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