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GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:37 am

She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……

fadi

Postby fadi » Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:02 pm

hi shakespear
really nice poem.,.,i really like it,.,.keep goin my friend

PS>>>>plz write your locaton IRAQ in a capital letters.,.its your country man :D u must be proud of it

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Postby Vega » Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:31 pm

Wow!!!! Very romantic words :D :D

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Postby babara » Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:46 pm

Very nice!! :P :D

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Hi all

Postby shakespear » Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:31 pm

thanks for all I want to become friend to all

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:22 am

Hi fadi ,where are you ? I really miss you .Could I hear your new news ? Good luck my dearest friend .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:08 am

shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye

I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her

She hurt my heart, she flew so high

She filled my life with love which's rare

I lived with her in a sweet dream

I said to her: could I kiss you?

Could you give me a hope, a beam?

She said at once: Yes but only few ……


Although it's a bit short.....I think it's good...........
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 17, 2008 7:00 am

my friend denvinbo if I can express my feelings in one words I`ll do.Thanks .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Sun Feb 17, 2008 9:23 am

Go ahead.......... :)
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:39 am

denvinbo wrote:Go ahead.......... :)


hahahaha... :lol: I really thought you would cry. :lol: :P :lol:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Mon Feb 18, 2008 2:30 am

I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi........... :lol:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Mon Feb 18, 2008 8:21 am

denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi........... :lol:


you rascal! :P
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Mon Feb 18, 2008 11:21 am

krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi........... :lol:


you rascal!


:P
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Mon Feb 18, 2008 2:06 pm

denvinbo wrote:
krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi........... :lol:


you rascal!


:P


What happen to you? :P :lol: :P You stole my smiley.... :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Tue Feb 19, 2008 2:57 am

krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:
krisi wrote:you rascal!


:P


What happen to you? :P :lol: :P You stole my smiley.... :lol: :lol: :lol:


But you are smiling........ :lol:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Raven » Tue Feb 19, 2008 8:42 am

what happen to you guys

Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhe :lol:
both of you are so funny

and to you shakespeare your poem very romantic

have anice day.....,

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Wed Feb 20, 2008 12:45 am

krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:
krisi wrote:you rascal!


:P


What happen to you? :P :lol: :P You stole my smiley.... :lol: :lol: :lol:


denvinbo wrote:But you are smiling........ :lol:


it's unbelievable! you didn't steal my smiley. Thanks, dear! :P :P :P
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:28 am

I'm a good people....hehehehe :lol:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 20, 2008 12:13 pm

Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:46 pm

shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .


Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... :mrgreen: be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :lol: :P: :lol: !!!

Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:38 am

krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .


Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... :mrgreen: be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :lol: :P: :lol: !!!

Shakespear, good to read you... bye...


If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............ :lol:
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