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Post by shakespear » Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:37 am

She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……

fadi

Post by fadi » Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:02 pm

hi shakespear
really nice poem.,.,i really like it,.,.keep goin my friend

PS>>>>plz write your locaton IRAQ in a capital letters.,.its your country man :D u must be proud of it

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Post by Vega » Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:31 pm

Wow!!!! Very romantic words :D :D

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Post by babara » Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:46 pm

Very nice!! :P :D

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Hi all

Post by shakespear » Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:31 pm

thanks for all I want to become friend to all

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:22 am

Hi fadi ,where are you ? I really miss you .Could I hear your new news ? Good luck my dearest friend .
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by denvinbo » Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:08 am

shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye

I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her

She hurt my heart, she flew so high

She filled my life with love which's rare

I lived with her in a sweet dream

I said to her: could I kiss you?

Could you give me a hope, a beam?

She said at once: Yes but only few ……
Although it's a bit short.....I think it's good...........

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by shakespear » Sun Feb 17, 2008 7:00 am

my friend denvinbo if I can express my feelings in one words I`ll do.Thanks .
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by denvinbo » Sun Feb 17, 2008 9:23 am

Go ahead.......... :)

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:39 am

denvinbo wrote:Go ahead.......... :)
hahahaha... :lol: I really thought you would cry. :lol: :P :lol:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by denvinbo » Mon Feb 18, 2008 2:30 am

I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi........... :lol:

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Mon Feb 18, 2008 8:21 am

denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi........... :lol:
you rascal! :P
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by denvinbo » Mon Feb 18, 2008 11:21 am

krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi........... :lol:
you rascal!
:P

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Mon Feb 18, 2008 2:06 pm

denvinbo wrote:
krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi........... :lol:
you rascal!
:P
What happen to you? :P :lol: :P You stole my smiley.... :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Post by denvinbo » Tue Feb 19, 2008 2:57 am

krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:
krisi wrote: you rascal!
:P
What happen to you? :P :lol: :P You stole my smiley.... :lol: :lol: :lol:
But you are smiling........ :lol:

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Raven » Tue Feb 19, 2008 8:42 am

what happen to you guys

Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhe :lol:
both of you are so funny

and to you shakespeare your poem very romantic

have anice day.....,

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Wed Feb 20, 2008 12:45 am

krisi wrote:
denvinbo wrote:
krisi wrote: you rascal!
:P
What happen to you? :P :lol: :P You stole my smiley.... :lol: :lol: :lol:
denvinbo wrote: But you are smiling........ :lol:
it's unbelievable! you didn't steal my smiley. Thanks, dear! :P :P :P
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by denvinbo » Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:28 am

I'm a good people....hehehehe :lol:

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by shakespear » Wed Feb 20, 2008 12:13 pm

Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:46 pm

shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... :mrgreen: be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :lol: :P: :lol: !!!

Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
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Post by denvinbo » Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:38 am

krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... :mrgreen: be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :lol: :P: :lol: !!!

Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............ :lol:

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:52 pm

denvinbo wrote:
krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... :mrgreen: be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :lol: :P: :lol: !!!

Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............ :lol:
OK! :P
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by denvinbo » Fri Feb 22, 2008 2:40 am

hahaha.......This global will have a monster....:P

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:26 am

Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Fri Feb 29, 2008 1:59 am

shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!! :mrgreen:
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Post by shakespear » Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:23 am

Hi krisi ,if you cry with me I`ll cry.
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Post by denvinbo » Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:25 pm

Krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!! :mrgreen:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Fri Mar 07, 2008 10:55 am

shakespear wrote:Hi krisi ,if you cry with me I`ll cry.
OK! I'll follow. :mrgreen:
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Post by shakespear » Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:57 am

Hi .But I don`t think that.
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Wed Mar 12, 2008 11:49 pm

shakespear wrote:Hi .But I don`t think that.
What do you mean? :| Are you doubting? :roll:
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Post by shakespear » Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:24 am

Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Fri Mar 14, 2008 2:05 am

shakespear wrote:Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by shakespear » Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:27 am

I THINK Y`LL CRY NOT ME BECAUSE U CAN`T WRITE POEM.
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Fri Mar 14, 2008 1:27 pm

shakespear wrote:I THINK Y`LL CRY NOT ME BECAUSE U CAN`T WRITE POEM.
So far I have no intention to compete with you... :P
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Post by shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:03 am

I think u r really who must cry because y don`t write something creative. goodluck.
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Hatter » Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:31 pm

I like short poems.
Better to leave people wishing there was more than otherwise. :D

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by nemo » Wed Apr 09, 2008 1:09 am

hi...i like it...
emmm....can u make a poem about me.....
hehehehe....
:D :D :D

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Post by shakespear » Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:15 am

thank u nemo
i can but i need sth about u
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Post by shakespear » Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:17 am

thank u nemo
i can but I need to know sth about u
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by loola » Thu May 22, 2008 4:00 pm

woow my friend . i like it so much..it's very romantic words..
thanks for ur lines...

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Post by shakespear » Sun May 25, 2008 7:48 am

Hi loola
thanks.
Really u r kind
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Post by allison » Thu May 29, 2008 2:43 am

shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...

Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.
[color=#404000][i]We cannot control the evil tongues of others, but good life enables us to disregard them.[/i][/color]

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by CybaSumo » Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:07 am

nice poem, but it's kinda short. i hope there's a longer version for this. thanks for sharing! :prof:

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Post by shakespear » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:00 pm

Hi allison
ur poem`s fantastic.Congratulations
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Post by shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:53 am

hi every one
i wanna meet u all
i wish to
our life is very short and the loveliest part in it is meeting friends and sharing happiness and sadness with them.
meet u
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bye
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Post by shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:21 am

hi everyone and goodluck
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Post by nxswxxg » Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:27 pm

nice words,but i don't understand others said :cry: :cry: :cry:

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Post by shakespear » Sun Jan 04, 2009 7:00 am

hi friend
happy new year to all friends here and have happy times
what did not u understand?
tell me and i`ll answer u,ok?
c u soon bye
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Post by farah » Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:02 am

i think its very gd and has simple language,underestood.gooooooooooooo ahead
we have to live our life freely

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Post by shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:02 pm

shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……

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Post by manar » Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:38 am

so sad but really soooooooo nice, :-D

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Post by shakespear » Fri Feb 04, 2011 5:50 pm

hello
thanx my dear friend 4 this lovely comment

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by shakespear » Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:25 am

hi

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Post by Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:06 am

Hi!!! it's so sad, actually i hate good bies that's why i said it, hmm yeah nobody wants to say goodbye to his/her love

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Post by shakespear » Sat Sep 17, 2011 4:43 am

sad style is not our choice...i think so

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Post by shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:05 am

i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments

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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by Krisi » Tue Jun 23, 2015 2:30 pm

denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi........... :lol:



Yes, I am a girl/female, I don't know you denvinbo!
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Post by shakespear » Tue Jan 05, 2016 11:25 am

wt's the difference???
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by shakespear » Fri Sep 15, 2017 9:00 am

RENEW OLD POEMS
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Re: GOOD BYE

Post by shakespear » Fri Sep 15, 2017 9:08 am

allison wrote:
shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
……
Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...

Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.
I think you'er the best in this club...you wrote so lovely words...full of representative words
congratulations
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