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Little hope

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:15 am

Little hope
She occupied my memory
And left me with sorrow alone
I can't forget her features
I called her in please tone
"Can you let me with you?
I want to be your own
What happened for our love?
Your heart is like a stone
Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"
She replied no answer
My sorrow has grown
And she made one gesture
I wished to hear a phone
Her gesture meant speech
"That she didn't care for moan
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Little hope

Postby Krisi » Fri Feb 29, 2008 2:03 am

shakespear wrote:Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"


:) Were you fat before? :P
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Re: Little hope

Postby Ms.A.Z » Fri Feb 29, 2008 8:16 am

beautiful :wink:

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Re: Little hope

Postby sweets » Fri Feb 29, 2008 9:54 am

every single word enter my heart smoothly i really congratulate u of word choosen

i do not know why ur writes carries the idea of separtion and weakness due to this love :|


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Re: Little hope

Postby Krisi » Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:22 pm

sweets wrote:every single word enter my heart smoothly i really congratulate u of word choosen

i do not know why ur writes carries the idea of separtion and weakness due to this love :|


cheeeeers


Yes, sweets you got what I mean...I'm also wondering. :roll:

But,

Shakespear were you fat before? :P
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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Sat Mar 01, 2008 9:54 am

Hi everyone .
krisi,thanks . I wasn`t fat before ."skin and bone " metaphore .
Sweet thanks a lot .Where are you from ?
Ms.A.z thanks and good luck .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Little hope

Postby Krisi » Sat Mar 01, 2008 1:48 pm

Krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"

:) Were you fat before? :P

shakespear wrote:...I wasn't fat before. "skin and bone" metaphor.


hmm, metaphor... :P
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Re: Little hope

Postby sweets » Sat Mar 01, 2008 4:10 pm

hello
well iam talking now while the f16 is shooting somewhere :(

so did u know where iam from :?: :?: :?:

i think u get it
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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:31 am

Hi sweet , I think you `re from Lebanon , Aren`t you ?
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Re: Little hope

Postby sweets » Tue Mar 04, 2008 3:42 pm

well
ur guess is totally wrong :(
iam form Palestine

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:17 am

Hi sweet .Trust me ,I u r from palestine after I sent u the massege. Good luck.
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Re: Little hope

Postby Krisi » Fri Mar 07, 2008 11:03 am

:shock:
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Re: Little hope

Postby Sunnypk » Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:08 am

Very nice dear

Keep it up! :)
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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:56 am

hi sweet . u r really brave people, and I can see ray of hope in the horizon.Good luck.
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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Wed May 14, 2008 8:28 am

Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Little hope

Postby loola » Fri May 23, 2008 2:22 pm

I like ur lines thanks dear..

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Sat May 24, 2008 9:32 am

I want to here about u
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Re: Little hope

Postby allison » Thu May 29, 2008 3:13 am

shakespear wrote:Little hope
She occupied my memory
And left me with sorrow alone
I can't forget her features
I called her in please tone
"Can you let me with you?
I want to be your own
What happened for our love?
Your heart is like a stone
Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"
She replied no answer
My sorrow has grown
And she made one gesture
I wished to hear a phone
Her gesture meant speech
"That she didn't care for moan



Every pain I take creates a little piece of my life.

I fell, stand and gathered the fragments of my broken self. Piece by piece I put them together but never to feel the same person I once was...
[color=#404000][i]We cannot control the evil tongues of others, but good life enables us to disregard them.[/i][/color]

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Re: Little hope

Postby allison » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:34 am

The pain I bear, the tears I shed
is the sad song of my wounded heart.
[color=#404000][i]We cannot control the evil tongues of others, but good life enables us to disregard them.[/i][/color]

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:06 pm

Hi allison
By ur 2 letters u make e crying & weeping .
Ur words r sad.
go ahead.
goodluck & c u later
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Little hope

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:57 am

hi every one
I can see ray of hope in the horizon.
have nice times
good luck
our life is like a night mare


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