LOVELY FACE
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LOVELY FACE
LOVELY FACE
Your eyes`re like stars
Lit the sky in the dark
Your cheeks `re like apples
Sweet taste in the mouth
Your lips are like fig
I always wish to taste them
Hastely..Hastely come to me
I'm sick in the bed
All the beauty in your face
Your face is a great world
Your eyes`re like stars
Lit the sky in the dark
Your cheeks `re like apples
Sweet taste in the mouth
Your lips are like fig
I always wish to taste them
Hastely..Hastely come to me
I'm sick in the bed
All the beauty in your face
Your face is a great world
our life is like a night mare
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Re: LOVELY FACE
wooooooooooooooooooow
it seems that iam the first one to read ur poem today :)
well
i see a big change in ur tone but i fell that there is a symbliosm in this poem am right or?????????
keep on this soul
cheeeeeeers
it seems that iam the first one to read ur poem today :)
well
i see a big change in ur tone but i fell that there is a symbliosm in this poem am right or?????????
keep on this soul
cheeeeeeers
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار
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Re: LOVELY FACE
Shakespear,
Sweets is right your tone has changed but I still find it funny... :P I think you're a funny person. rascal! :P
You perk up my day... :) Thanks!
Sweets is right your tone has changed but I still find it funny... :P I think you're a funny person. rascal! :P
You perk up my day... :) Thanks!
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thanks for everuone.
sweet,ur the 1st one who read my poem.thanks
krisi you can`t arouse me and I think you`re bastard or bitch because you describe me as rascal.
I think you`re in need to be intercoursed
sweet,ur the 1st one who read my poem.thanks
krisi you can`t arouse me and I think you`re bastard or bitch because you describe me as rascal.
I think you`re in need to be intercoursed
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it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose of views
Hope you understand well
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Hope you understand well
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shakespear
Could you please check rascal in your dictionary. It's used to describe a small child who has a fondness for causing trouble in a playful way. Not as what you have in mind. That's why I connected it after saying you're funny. I regard it more as a compliment cuz I know we're no more kids...
Well, if you have a negative meaning to it, I want you to know that I have nothing in mind. I just looked at everything as a play upon reading your poem.
I'm sorry if I've been misunderstood and honestly have no bad intentions in saying it. I was not thinking that it would be taken in a negative way.
Well thanks anyway.
Could you please check rascal in your dictionary. It's used to describe a small child who has a fondness for causing trouble in a playful way. Not as what you have in mind. That's why I connected it after saying you're funny. I regard it more as a compliment cuz I know we're no more kids...
Well, if you have a negative meaning to it, I want you to know that I have nothing in mind. I just looked at everything as a play upon reading your poem.
I'm sorry if I've been misunderstood and honestly have no bad intentions in saying it. I was not thinking that it would be taken in a negative way.
Well thanks anyway.
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Thanks Sunnypk.Sunnypk wrote:it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose of views
Hope you understand well
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you are always welcomed Dear Krisi :)Krisi wrote:Thanks Sunnypk.Sunnypk wrote:it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really
allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as
being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose my views
Hope you understand well
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Why is your welcome in the past tense?Sunnypk wrote:you are always welcomed Dear Krisi :)Krisi wrote:Thanks Sunnypk.Sunnypk wrote:it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really
allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as
being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose my views
Hope you understand well
.
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To Krisi:
:D .. you are always welcome.. is it fine now
:D .. you are always welcome.. is it fine now
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hahahaha, OK! :PSunnypk wrote:To Krisi:
:D .. you are always welcome.. is it fine now
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Krisi I so sorry for my words cuz I understood it as a bad word but couldn`t you choose kinder word?
Again I`m so sorry for my misunderstand.Good luck.
Again I`m so sorry for my misunderstand.Good luck.
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I'm sorry about that. Maybe I'll minimize using it. Yes, I'll use another word!shakespear wrote:Krisi I so sorry for my words cuz I understood it as a bad word but couldn`t you choose kinder word?
Again I`m so sorry for my misunderstand.Good luck.
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You won't know until you try! :Psweets wrote:so can we say that every things is ok :D :D
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Krisi wrote:You won't know until you try! :Psweets wrote:so can we say that every things is ok :D :D
so keep using practicing of this word :D sweet than you maybe get it
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sweets meant (was referring to) any word, Sunnypk. :|Sunnypk wrote:Krisi wrote:You won't know until you try! :Psweets wrote:so can we say that every things is ok :D :D
so keep using practicing of this word :D sweet than you maybe get it
There are really some words that have dual meanings. And these meanings whether good or bad will depend on the person using it and the the receiver of the message. It's not really the speakers fault if ever they have been misunderstood. The receiver should take the essence of the word from the whole context of the message. :|
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HI everyone,
Krisi, I`m so sorry to speak like that but u described me as a vi llain when u use the word "rascal",
U could check it in the dictionary and u have to use words kinder than this rude word.
Again I`m so sorry 4 u and 4 everyone in this club.
Krisi, I`m so sorry to speak like that but u described me as a vi llain when u use the word "rascal",
U could check it in the dictionary and u have to use words kinder than this rude word.
Again I`m so sorry 4 u and 4 everyone in this club.
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It's now a thing of the past. Damage was done! But it's OK...I'm not thinking of it anymore.shakespear wrote:HI everyone,
Krisi, I`m so sorry to speak like that but u described me as a vi llain when u use the word "rascal",
U could check it in the dictionary and u have to use words kinder than this rude word.
Again I`m so sorry 4 u and 4 everyone in this club.
If you are suggesting to check it in the dictionary then I would recommend you to buy another dictionary (latest one).
(And please just refer to my old post because I just can't go on repeating the same answers to you, it's kind of boring for me.)
I'm sorry 4 u too! :)
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Hi everyone.I sent an apology on Sun. Mar. 23- 2008 but I can`t see it in this page,why?
Anyhow, I`d like to say sorry cuz I spoke like that but u describe me as villain " rascal".
u can use kinder word than this word.Good luck.
Anyhow, I`d like to say sorry cuz I spoke like that but u describe me as villain " rascal".
u can use kinder word than this word.Good luck.
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Hi sunnypk. My friend I`d like to thank u cuz u advise me.
We must all learn from others.thanks again.
We must all learn from others.thanks again.
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Re: LOVELY FACE
it a wonderful describeof the face dont give up and keep up writing
good job
good job
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Re: LOVELY FACE
hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
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Re: LOVELY FACE
hi
from time to time i read my poems and try 2 collect them,
try 2 remember them ,
2 remember the events related 2 them
that is ok
now i feel cool now
good luck
from time to time i read my poems and try 2 collect them,
try 2 remember them ,
2 remember the events related 2 them
that is ok
now i feel cool now
good luck
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Re: LOVELY FACE
sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx
i didn't see this comment
thnx
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hi farah
wr r u?
plz keep contact
gd lk
wr r u?
plz keep contact
gd lk
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Hi! i hadnt read this poem and i think it will take much time to read all of them :D.shakespear wrote:Your eyes`re like stars
Lit the sky in the dark
well this poem is full brightness u used sweet words, it's so nice.
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thnx friend and i hope to read ur last poem....
best wishes
best wishes
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shakespear wrote:LOVELY FACE
Your eyes`re like stars
Lit the sky in the dark
Your cheeks `re like apples
Sweet taste in the mouth
Your lips are like fig
I always wish to taste them
Hastely..Hastely come to me
I'm sick in the bed
All the beauty in your face
Your face is a great world
short poem
our life is like a night mare