Love you because...

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Love you because...

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Love you because …
You make me feel I’m me
You make me feel I’m free
You make me feel I’m like a tree
Which is I stay forever in one place
Which is I’ll never be gone away from you

The way you take me to your heart
Is the way I want to share my emotion to you
The way you feel is the way I feel
I lose and gain love is when you gain and lose
The distance you give, I will never forget

The day you tell me I should forget you
Is the day I will tear apart
The day you walk away I never forget
The chance I tell you that I love you
Is still inside me, in my soul

Because you’re away from me
Because when I look in the mirror I see you
Because you are yourself
Because … I love you
Because, because, and because …
To love and be loved is the greatest joy on earth.
Love decreases when it ceases to increase
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Nice poem!
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umm... Very good I like it

keep it up!
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"Because you’re away from me
Because when I look in the mirror I see you
Because you are yourself
Because … I love you
Because, because, and because …"


my favourit part :D
thanks to share us ur poem


cheeeeeeeeeers
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You took it somewhere or you made it yourself?
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denvinbo wrote:You took it somewhere or you made it yourself?
Why is your mind tainted with that? Don't mind so much of what's going on around, purify your mind please...
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Hi,
"Because you’re away from me
Because when I look in the mirror I see you
Because you are yourself
Because … I love you
Because, because, and because …"
I think these lines are fantastic
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oh,so lovely words I liked them so much
thankssssssssssssssssssss
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