**A Single Rose **

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**A Single Rose **

Postby MONEM » Sat Mar 29, 2008 10:47 am

Single Rose :)
Long time ago I was walking in the garden and I remember that I saw a beautiful flowers all around the garden but I noticed there is a single rose in the corner attracted me I went to it and I picked it up , The rose was very beautiful and I wonder why no body have noticed this rose .. I thought maybe I’m so lucky or it’s all about the destiny.
This Rose was and still my love she really looks like the beautiful Rose and I think that she is a rose from haven. I ask my self every day if I wasn’t the guy who picked this rose how sad man I’ll be and how lonely I’ll be ?! There are a lot of beautiful things around us it could be belongs to us but we should look around us until we find them.
In this life there are sad and lonely people they think that they are so lonely and they will be lonely forever, Well never think like that.. if you are a good man /woman then you are like a single rose , maybe a lot of people will pass by without noticing you but a special person will pick you up to make you happy and you will be no single any more .

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A single Rose was in the garden
I picked it up I didn’t know that I picked my life ..
I didn’t know that I picked my wife .
I looked up.. I looked high ..
I Know our destiny from the God who made the sky
My single rose please don’t feel shy .
Don’t ask why I picked you why??!
I just know that you make my fly..
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I hope every body like it specially Krisi who asked me to write about this title :wink:
Written by Monem
29 Mach ,2008
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)

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Re: **A Single Rose **

Postby Krisi » Sat Mar 29, 2008 12:55 pm

MONEM wrote:Single Rose :)
Long time ago I was walking in the garden and I remember that I saw a beautiful flowers all around the garden but I noticed there is a single rose in the corner attracted me I went to it and I picked it up , The rose was very beautiful and I wonder why no body have noticed this rose .. I thought maybe I’m so lucky or it’s all about the destiny.
This Rose was and still my love she really looks like the beautiful Rose and I think that she is a rose from haven. I ask my self every day if I wasn’t the guy who picked this rose how sad man I’ll be and how lonely I’ll be ?! There are a lot of beautiful things around us it could be belongs to us but we should look around us until we find them.
In this life there are sad and lonely people they think that they are so lonely and they will be lonely forever, Well never think like that.. if you are a good man /woman then you are like a single rose , maybe a lot of people will pass by without noticing you but a special person will pick you up to make you happy and you will be no single any more .

*************************************************
A single Rose was in the garden
I picked it up I didn’t know that I picked my life ..
I didn’t know that I picked my wife .
I looked up.. I looked high ..
I Know our destiny from the God who made the sky
My single rose please don’t feel shy .
Don’t ask why I picked you why??!
I just know that you make me fly..
*****************************************************
I hope every body like it specially Krisi who asked me to write about this title :wink:
Written by Monem
29 Mach ,2008


Thank you Monem. I really like the essence of your story. And the poem is so pleasing.
Thank you too for keeping your promise. :)
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Re: **A Single Rose **

Postby MONEM » Sat Mar 29, 2008 1:31 pm

Hiiiiii :) , I’m better in articles than poems but I put a few words for you : ) , The most important thing is the object of the story , I’m glad that you liked it :D .
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!

great minds have purposes other have wishes.

With all love

MONEM:)

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Re: **A Single Rose **

Postby Krisi » Sat Mar 29, 2008 1:40 pm

MONEM wrote:Hiiiiii :) , I’m better in articles than poems but I put a few words for you : ) , The most important thing is the object of the story , I’m glad that you liked it :D .


Both the article and poem are very good! Thanks again. :)
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Re: **A Single Rose **

Postby MONEM » Sat Mar 29, 2008 1:46 pm

You didn't tell me about your self , did you forget :wink: ?
you can tell me here or in private message :D
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!

great minds have purposes other have wishes.

With all love

MONEM:)

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Re: **A Single Rose **

Postby sweets » Sat Mar 29, 2008 2:11 pm

good job Momennothing to say aganist it

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Re: **A Single Rose **

Postby MONEM » Sat Mar 29, 2008 2:23 pm

Hiiiiii sweets , I'm happy to see you :D
I couldn't know the meaning of this word "Momennothing" :roll: do you mean Monem i have nothing to say about it :wink: :roll:
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!

great minds have purposes other have wishes.

With all love

MONEM:)

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Re: **A Single Rose **

Postby Sunnypk » Tue Apr 01, 2008 2:43 am

Hi Monem

it's really pleasing and like too essence of this story.

Best of luck
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Re: **A Single Rose **

Postby MONEM » Tue Apr 01, 2008 3:32 am

Thank you Sunnypk, I'm glad that you like it :D
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!

great minds have purposes other have wishes.

With all love

MONEM:)

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Re: **A Single Rose **

Postby Krisi » Sun Jun 29, 2008 2:08 pm

Monem, I hope you can write one more poem... :-)
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Re: **A Single Rose **

Postby AzizA » Tue Jul 01, 2008 10:31 pm

MONEM,I liked your introduction and I read it carefullly so I really loved your poem ,it's so mighty^^
2 years later, I'll became a teacher of English;I'll get quite joy whenever I'll use my English^^


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