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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:52 pm

denvinbo wrote:
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shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .


Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... :mrgreen: be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :lol: :P: :lol: !!!

Shakespear, good to read you... bye...


If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............ :lol:

OK! :P
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Fri Feb 22, 2008 2:40 am

hahaha.......This global will have a monster....:P
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:26 am

Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Fri Feb 29, 2008 1:59 am

shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .


Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!! :mrgreen:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:23 am

Hi krisi ,if you cry with me I`ll cry.
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby denvinbo » Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:25 pm

Krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .


Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!! :mrgreen:


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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Fri Mar 07, 2008 10:55 am

shakespear wrote:Hi krisi ,if you cry with me I`ll cry.


OK! I'll follow. :mrgreen:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:57 am

Hi .But I don`t think that.
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Wed Mar 12, 2008 11:49 pm

shakespear wrote:Hi .But I don`t think that.


What do you mean? :| Are you doubting? :roll:
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:24 am

Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Fri Mar 14, 2008 2:05 am

shakespear wrote:Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:27 am

I THINK Y`LL CRY NOT ME BECAUSE U CAN`T WRITE POEM.
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Fri Mar 14, 2008 1:27 pm

shakespear wrote:I THINK Y`LL CRY NOT ME BECAUSE U CAN`T WRITE POEM.


So far I have no intention to compete with you... :P
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:03 am

I think u r really who must cry because y don`t write something creative. goodluck.
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Hatter » Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:31 pm

I like short poems.
Better to leave people wishing there was more than otherwise. :D

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby nemo » Wed Apr 09, 2008 1:09 am

hi...i like it...
emmm....can u make a poem about me.....
hehehehe....
:D :D :D

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:15 am

thank u nemo
i can but i need sth about u
good luck
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:17 am

thank u nemo
i can but I need to know sth about u
goos luck
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby loola » Thu May 22, 2008 4:00 pm

woow my friend . i like it so much..it's very romantic words..
thanks for ur lines...

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sun May 25, 2008 7:48 am

Hi loola
thanks.
Really u r kind
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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby allison » Thu May 29, 2008 2:43 am

shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……


Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...

Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.
[color=#404000][i]We cannot control the evil tongues of others, but good life enables us to disregard them.[/i][/color]


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