SOFT WORDS

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SOFT WORDS

Postby shakespear » Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:28 am

SOFT WORDS
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
I enjoy hearing you for long time
Can you look at me please merrily?
I enjoy seeing you in the prime
When you want to walk swing and swing
Every thing in the world is worthless
When you want to speak only sing
You have – in lovely songs –more clearness
our life is like a night mare

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby Krisi » Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:56 am

Nice!

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby shakespear » Thu Mar 13, 2008 12:32 pm

Thanks my friend.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby Sunnypk » Sat Mar 15, 2008 6:02 pm

Very Good
As you so, so shall you reap

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:06 am

Thanks sunnypk ,ur very kind and gentle.
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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby shakespear » Wed May 14, 2008 8:27 am

Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it
our life is like a night mare

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby shakespear » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:36 am

[b]hi
one day we will regret koz we spend our life afraid to speak frankly.

c u & good luck[/b]
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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:15 pm

hi my friends
we must meet every time every hour every second
i hope so
good luck
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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:15 am

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby farah » Wed Mar 04, 2009 8:50 am

i think its good and have different taste
we have to live our life freely

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby Mohyiedine » Wed Apr 22, 2009 1:31 pm

greeting friend, beautiful poem but you should improve your ability a bit littre to can send what do you want send , and i wish good luck to you

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 27, 2009 12:35 pm

hi friend
thnx 4 this advice and plz send me ur comment and how to improve the ability
u can also send me what is the weak line in the poem
thnx again
c u
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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby farah » Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:28 am

hi
your words are also soft
hhhhh
c u
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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby shakespear » Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:07 am

hello
thnx u toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
gd luck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby Dessy » Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:49 am

I feel great :-D

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby LayLay » Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:57 pm

I have come to help you reply to the kind-hearted people you have a great Thank you, Bai Bai {-:

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby farah » Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:36 pm

one day we will regret koz we spend our life afraid to speak frankly.[/b]
these words are soft

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby Rose » Thu Aug 05, 2010 9:44 pm

Nice poem

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 08, 2010 1:32 pm

hello every one
thnx 4 ur comment
c u thnx

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Re: SOFT WORDS

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:58 pm

hello all
plz show me ur comment
c u


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