BEAUTY(apoem)

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BEAUTY(apoem)

Postby habhoba » Sat Jun 14, 2008 9:46 am

Beauty is the best portrait the eyes can see.
Its sweetness is seen differently by you and me.

Some see beauty as a fantastic dream.
That’s how it may sometimes seem.

Others see beauty in the high blue sky.
Where there is the sun and the birds fly.

One may dream about the moon.
He thinks that this is beauty and he will see it soon.

Another one can see beauty in the flowers.
And live with this for a lot of lovely hours.

Someone thinks that beauty is the sea.
For that his heart is full of joy and glee.

God created beauty in everything around you.
I love beauty much, do you love it too?

Think with me about the bless of beauty.
What is it? This is not a big duty.

Look and smile by a heart filled with joy.
As beauty is a valuable diamond for a girl and boy

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Re: BEAUTY(apoem)

Postby angeleyez » Sat Jun 14, 2008 1:07 pm

Nice Poem :-P :-P Keep it up {-:
Please... Correct me if I have a spelling mistake !

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Re: BEAUTY(apoem)

Postby sweets » Sat Jun 14, 2008 2:04 pm

keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep on
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار

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Re: BEAUTY(apoem)

Postby Annaa » Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:07 am

Nice poem ;-)
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..

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Re: BEAUTY(apoem)

Postby habhoba » Mon Jun 16, 2008 12:35 pm

Thanks you all for your reply..........

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Re: BEAUTY(apoem)

Postby habhoba » Sun Jan 25, 2009 8:35 pm

I am waiting for all the replies on this poem..


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