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We don't know, we love.

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Hello everybody !

Krisi told me that this composition was nice. :mrgreen: So... I post it here now. :lol:



I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who you are.
And you don't know who I am.

I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who I am.
And you don't know who your are.

I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who we are.
And you don't know who we are.



[Vocabulary is a bit homogen. :lol: But syntax and sense are very logical. :lol: ]



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it's like a puzzle {-:

i like it cuz. it's funny :-D

cheeeeeeeeers :mrgreen
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Hello sweets

According to me this forum is turning slow by slow, step by step coming into the love subject
through yours true love story.

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hi murugan

could u send a pm message plz i waana to talk to u seriously

iam waiting
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sweets wrote:hi murugan

could u send a pm message plz i waana to talk to u seriously

iam waiting
Hi Sweets,

Firstly I do not know who are you?

But I know everything through Mr. Kannan and our friends
Kannan has transfer to the head office at Mumbai so he moved to Mumbai with his family
Our friends spread somewhere to search their life to be settleld in their life.
when he moved Kannan told me that we should not disturb her because through us she is often thinking about baskar
and it makes trouble her future.

According to us you are our special family member in our nest( Nest means our friends circle moreover baskar's family always wish you to get a new and wonderful life in future.

According to us, you should do baskar's wish
that is
you should stand on your own leg it means you should earn something for you
often he told us after he married you he wanted to pick you everywhere in the world
and through that you must have the awareness of the world

He has broadminded why I am saying this?

he always saying the world should be filled with pure love there we should not the difference in between rich and poor

There should not be differnce among Hindu Muslim christian

He believes females can change the world with love

My sweets is also like that, he told that

Finally I want to say, these words are only for you don't reply me

Because Kannan told me that I should not disturb you.

Bye

Murugan
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hello murugan
for me what really disturb me that u did not say that ur kannan freind if u say that before things may change
if see kannan plz. send my best regards to him and his family and best wishes for promotion


tell kannan that iam doing well nowadays and iam working on my graduation papers and looking to start a new life inshalla

(Because Kannan told me that I should not disturb you.) you'r welcome anytime u and kannan if he can contact


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Hello sweets

You can pick up and move your everyfoot towards future, you will get the bright future.

If it happens, all credits goes to Baskar.

Am I right?

Can you do it?

Shall I belive you?

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well ,i believe wthat iam doing is for myself i know it's baskar wish and iam following it

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Nice :lol: :mrgreen:
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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Dear Sweets

I hope this is the last day, the soul of baskar is spread in the universe.

It has been satisfied with your answer

but he left you in this world to have everything

Just pray for him with your forummates his soul to be rest in peace

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hi
well what do u mean by(hope this is the last day, the soul of baskar is spread in the universe.) the word last refer to what ??????????????????????

nice to see u around

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shokin wrote:Hello everybody !

Krisi told me that this composition was nice. :mrgreen: So... I post it here now. :lol:



I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who you are.
And you don't know who I am.

I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who I am.
And you don't know who your are.

I love you.
You love me.
But I don't know who we are.
And you don't know who we are.



[Vocabulary is a bit homogen. :lol: But syntax and sense are very logical. :lol: ]



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sweets wrote:well ,i believe wthat iam doing is for myself i know it's baskar wish and iam following it

cheeeeeeers
sweet... :-)
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Hello sweets,

Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer

I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer

Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?

he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.

again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,....) his soul to be rest in peace

can you do It?

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murugan wrote:Hello sweets,

Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer

I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer

Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?

he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.

again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,Dixie,...........) his soul to be rest in peace

can you do It?

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I'm glad to hear you ! even if you don't talk about my poem ! :lol: :lol: :lol:



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murugan wrote:Hello sweets,

Really I am glad to see here, Annna and Krishi admired your feeling by the way your answer

I welcome it and I more expect from the others (your friends) thoughts about your answer

Baskar's soul spread in the universe, why I said that?

he satisfied with your answer, after that his soul spread in the universe, I hope.

again I ask you to pray with your friends( Annaa, Krishi, Tora, Hardi,....) his soul to be rest in peace

can you do It?

murugan
Honestly, I don't know sweets love story (I just gave a remark on sweets replies to you) but, if Baskar is truly dead then I think it's really better to let his soul rest.
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But how Murugan knows Baskar ???
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..
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hi murgan, anna ,and krisi

well let baskar rest in peace
ANNA the sotry itself is tall sum up he was here and pass away later
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sweets wrote:hi murgan, anna ,and krisi

well let baskar rest in peace
ANNA the story itself is tall sum up he was here and pass away later
:shock: really? OH MY!!! :shock:

I don't know your love story really... I just wish it was not opened here.

Goodluck to you sweets...
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krisi"eally? OH MY!!! :shock:

I don't know your love story really... I just wish it was not opened here.

Good luck to you sweets."

in fact yes it started here and ended here it's Allah will what we can do? for me i passed this experience in spite of how hard it was that you met someone even u do not see him well then passed sometimes it open's a gate for many thoughts to enter ur mind starting by WHAT IF :?:



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