ENDLESS DAY

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ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:26 am

Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless

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Post by Vega » Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:36 am

A very good poem, :D Bravo Shakespeare !

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Post by babara » Thu Jan 18, 2007 2:37 pm

Hmm..agree...NICE!!

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Post by shokin » Thu Jan 18, 2007 10:21 pm

It is normal, it is Shakespear !

Shokin

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Post by babara » Sat Jan 20, 2007 8:52 am

shokin wrote:It is normal, it is Shakespear !

Shokin
Hmm..You are right!! :D :lol:

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Post by Sunnypk » Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:55 pm

nice poem
It's too good

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Post by shakespear » Wed Feb 21, 2007 7:58 am

THANKS ALOT ALL OF YOU . SHOKIN ! DONT YOU THINK ONE IS IN NEED TO ENCOURAGEMENT . THANK YOU AGAIN

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Post by shokin » Wed Feb 21, 2007 3:27 pm

Yes, we all need encouragements ! even Shakespear and shokin !

We are waiting for your next poems, hanging tongue.

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:08 am

shokin my friend I miss you.It `s a long time .I want to hear about you .Good luck .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by denvinbo » Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:10 am

A sad poem......

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:28 am

We must write everything inside our heart .Good luck .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:32 am

Hi . It`s not very bad .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:35 am

Hi . It`s not very sad , don`t you think ?
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:19 am

Hi . sad ,inside our hearts, is great .
We must throw it out .Good luck.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by EliasJ » Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:59 pm

you have something special something different iam wonder your words are very special
i hope you a great future :wink:
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Post by shakespear » Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:08 am

Thank u EliasJ
u r very kind
regards
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:26 am

hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
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Post by shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:32 pm

Hi .
sad ,inside our hearts, is great .
We must throw it out .
Good luck.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:12 am

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 11:52 am

i think u r good poet.............
we have to live our life freely

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by asdfghjkl » Tue Mar 10, 2009 3:48 pm

It's a nice poem with a rich meaning.
;-)

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by (((Edu))) » Tue Mar 10, 2009 7:31 pm

Cool... very cool.

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:40 pm

hi every one
thanks 4 this comment
and i hope the best times 4 u
i hope we can meet continuously
our life is like a night mare

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:51 pm

shakespear wrote:Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless
comment plz

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:51 pm

shakespear wrote:My winter always needs your spring
when we are in loved we feel we depend on the other person, everthing is around her/him, nice poem Shakespear :)

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:41 am

thnx friend and hope hear sth new from u ....u have to try new poem....
have good luck

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by Krisi » Mon Sep 12, 2011 10:40 am

a very nice poem. Thanks for tirelessly sharing with us your writings.

I still think love is true but, I think I am not just lucky when it comes to love. I guess the definition of true love changes if you will feel hatred and heartaches always.
As of now, I am thinking how life would be without love, care and compassion for one another. Will we still walk with emotion? Will we still see appreciation on one's face? Will we still see the values or meaning of what we do and say? I do hope there still will remain good values for mankind... an endless day indeed.
Good luck to you.
-krisi-

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by Lara » Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:56 pm

Yeah, actually i have a new one, i will show u soon, it needs to completed first :D

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Sat Sep 17, 2011 9:00 am

krisi my friend
really ur comment is very strong and holds rich meanings among its words and i do hope u always send comments on our poems to enrich us in addition toour poems....i think u'll add a value to our writings...
thnx 4 this lovely comment
best wishes

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:57 am

hi
i hope u r so happy

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Post by shakespear » Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:17 am

shakespear wrote:Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless

short poem
and old
our life is like a night mare

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