Don't leave me Oh dear, catch me more tightly
I feel I shall melt, I lose my force
My heart's very weak, it beats slightly
Nothing can take you; I'm with you in any course
Fly highly don't fear... like birds in the sky
Wherever you want to go, my will to go with you
Let's live a sweet life, together we must try
Even you want to die; I'll die with you too
LIVING TOGETHER
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babara "I want to hear about you,and we all miss you.We like your comments and explanation .Please contact with us and good luck .
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This poem's mean is normal but deep........
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babara I`ll contact with you. thanks for your missing me .
denvinbo thanks for your interesting .
denvinbo thanks for your interesting .
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Thanks to everyone who misses me and I hope meet you in good times .GOOD LUCK .
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Oh,it's so touching!Well done,Shakespear!!!*THUMBS UP*
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Hi everyone . please don`t cut your comment. Good luck.
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woow shakespear.. you are a real poet ..
you have a nice world .. i like it so much ..
thank u dear
you have a nice world .. i like it so much ..
thank u dear
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thanks dear
I want to hear about u.
ur comment is important for me
bye
I want to hear about u.
ur comment is important for me
bye
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Re: LIVING TOGETHER
It's written like a punk-rock song in russia .
I am not in my way, it's only reflection.
My innocent soul has not ressurection.
My innocent soul has not ressurection.
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Hi AlexVlasoff
thanks for ur comment
could u make a melody fo it?? Just a try.
Good luck
thanks for ur comment
could u make a melody fo it?? Just a try.
Good luck
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hi
We like your comments and explanations .Please contact with us and good luck .
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Re: LIVING TOGETHER
i hadnt seen this poem till now, it's nice
Well, Shakes i think if anyone loves he/she wouldnt leave his/her beloved, or maybe she had her reasons for doing that, Love always hurts...have u listened to this song "Love Hurts" from Nazareth, i advice u to hear it, c u
Well, Shakes i think if anyone loves he/she wouldnt leave his/her beloved, or maybe she had her reasons for doing that, Love always hurts...have u listened to this song "Love Hurts" from Nazareth, i advice u to hear it, c u
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i think in the beginning love is so sweet but after that its so hard and hurts the loversLara wrote:Love always hurts
my point of view
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some of my poems are shortshakespear wrote:Don't leave me Oh dear, catch me more tightly
I feel I shall melt, I lose my force
My heart's very weak, it beats slightly
Nothing can take you; I'm with you in any course
Fly highly don't fear... like birds in the sky
Wherever you want to go, my will to go with you
Let's live a sweet life, together we must try
Even you want to die; I'll die with you too
maybe i have to copmlete
our life is like a night mare