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DREAM

Postby sweets » Tue Dec 16, 2008 4:26 pm

Once i had a dream
To own the world
To have it no matter coast


I moved around i was here I went there
I was running all the time fraid that i'll pass


Now i have everything ..... i have the world
But something is missing i do not know
I feel it once and twice i cried and suffer still do not why


I backe to where i lived to my home to discover ..............
that


My World Was Here :-)
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Re: DREAM

Postby Sunnypk » Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:06 am

I just have read the definition of "Dream" so want to share with you
Dreams are sequence images, sounds and feelings experienced while sleeping, particularly strongly associated with rapid eye movement sleep.Dreams are sequence images, sounds and feelings experienced while sleeping, particularly strongly associated with rapid eye movement sleep.

but when I think and imagine your dream then I realize that something is missing in your life you trying to find but you can't but at least you passed your past and get milk and honey life again with great hopes :-)

Your have written very well dear.
As you so, so shall you reap

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Re: DREAM

Postby sweets » Wed Dec 17, 2008 4:16 pm

hello sunny
i am so glad that ur here and happy cuz. ur the first who comment on my write {-:

i know that title does not suite much you can say it was a miskate
the major idea here is that u can find what u looking for not in far places sometimes it is found in front of ur eyes but u don't note it in same momment


cheeeeeeers {-:
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Re: DREAM

Postby Sunnypk » Wed Dec 17, 2008 4:54 pm

Miskate??

Well maybe you are right but just I shared with you my own views too concerned to your topic, didn't say you anything that there is mistake anywhere.
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Re: DREAM

Postby Psixochka » Thu Dec 18, 2008 8:51 am

I like your job!!! It is nice :-)

As I know dream is mean not only to see some pictures during the sleep, but to wish something real or not. So I think "dream" is suits to the poem.
There is a good proverb "All good things come to he who waits"
I like these:
"I backe to where i lived to my home to discover ..............
that My World Was Here"
Home, it is a place, where you can everything, I think :-)
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)

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Re: DREAM

Postby sweets » Thu Dec 18, 2008 12:43 pm

sunny
thanks for ur concern :-)

Psixochka
thanx for ur words {-:
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Re: DREAM

Postby Psixochka » Thu Dec 18, 2008 1:37 pm

You are always willcome :-D
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)

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Re: DREAM

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 18, 2009 8:00 pm

hi
i think u r very sad and there is a deep sigh in ur poem
good luck and accept my wishes
our life is like a night mare

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Re: DREAM

Postby sweets » Thu Feb 19, 2009 3:46 pm

shakespear
nice to see u againe how are u and what's ur news

see u
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Re: DREAM

Postby murugan » Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:43 pm

Dear Sweets(Mohammed Lya)

Am I right?
Kannan found your real N---.
I gave your ID to kannan.Immediately he found your real N---..and he told me he will contact you when it is necessary and that time would come.

just now I have seen this poem
it is amazing
but as shakespear told, there is a deep sad we found and what it is we only know that.

That is not good. Try to keep your smile always in your life.

murugan

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Re: DREAM

Postby sweets » Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:12 am

hi
iam so galde that i find u here
but at email is not my real name that part lya have a part of my name while that first is my dad name is it my magic :lol: :lol: :lol:

iam waiting for that time tell him that

but u did not tell me about ur self as i asked u at email

i'll try to be smile

see u
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