GOOD BYE

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby CybaSumo » Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:07 am

nice poem, but it's kinda short. i hope there's a longer version for this. thanks for sharing! :prof:

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:00 pm

Hi allison
ur poem`s fantastic.Congratulations
our life is like a night mare

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:53 am

hi every one
i wanna meet u all
i wish to
our life is very short and the loveliest part in it is meeting friends and sharing happiness and sadness with them.
meet u
good luck
bye
our life is like a night mare

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:21 am

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby nxswxxg » Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:27 pm

nice words,but i don't understand others said :cry: :cry: :cry:

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sun Jan 04, 2009 7:00 am

hi friend
happy new year to all friends here and have happy times
what did not u understand?
tell me and i`ll answer u,ok?
c u soon bye
our life is like a night mare

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby farah » Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:02 am

i think its very gd and has simple language,underestood.gooooooooooooo ahead
we have to live our life freely

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:02 pm

shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……



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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby manar » Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:38 am

so sad but really soooooooo nice, :-D

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Fri Feb 04, 2011 5:50 pm

hello
thanx my dear friend 4 this lovely comment

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:25 am

hi

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:06 am

Hi!!! it's so sad, actually i hate good bies that's why i said it, hmm yeah nobody wants to say goodbye to his/her love

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Sat Sep 17, 2011 4:43 am

sad style is not our choice...i think so

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:05 am

i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments

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Re: GOOD BYE

Postby Krisi » Tue Jun 23, 2015 2:30 pm

denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi........... :lol:





Yes, I am a girl/female, I don't know you denvinbo!
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