LIVING TOGETHER

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LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Fri Jan 26, 2007 7:32 pm

Don't leave me Oh dear, catch me more tightly
I feel I shall melt, I lose my force
My heart's very weak, it beats slightly
Nothing can take you; I'm with you in any course
Fly highly don't fear... like birds in the sky
Wherever you want to go, my will to go with you
Let's live a sweet life, together we must try
Even you want to die; I'll die with you too

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Postby Sunnypk » Sat Jan 27, 2007 3:46 am

Nice poem It's really terrific

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Postby babara » Sat Jan 27, 2007 7:29 am

Sweet poem... :)

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Postby Vega » Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:22 pm

Nice poem shakespare, indeed.

Even you want to die; I'll die with you too

Yeah, Bravo shakespare!

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Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 04, 2007 4:54 am

Thanks

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Postby Dexter » Sun Feb 04, 2007 5:37 am

nice poem, shakespear... very good :D

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:15 am

babara "I want to hear about you,and we all miss you.We like your comments and explanation .Please contact with us and good luck .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby denvinbo » Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:09 am

This poem's mean is normal but deep........
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

PIETY-The stories of parents and children

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:55 am

babara I`ll contact with you. thanks for your missing me .
denvinbo thanks for your interesting .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 11:05 am

Thanks to everyone who misses me and I hope meet you in good times .GOOD LUCK .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby LegodeFein » Mon Mar 03, 2008 2:50 pm

Oh,it's so touching!Well done,Shakespear!!!*THUMBS UP*

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:28 am

Hi everyone . please don`t cut your comment. Good luck.
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Wed May 14, 2008 8:32 am

Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby loola » Sun May 18, 2008 11:53 am

woow shakespear.. you are a real poet ..
you have a nice world .. i like it so much ..

thank u dear

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Mon May 19, 2008 8:01 am

thanks dear
I want to hear about u.
ur comment is important for me
bye
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby AlexVlasoff » Tue May 20, 2008 5:23 pm

It's written like a punk-rock song in russia {-: .
I am not in my way, it's only reflection.
My innocent soul has not ressurection.

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Thu May 22, 2008 7:19 am

Hi AlexVlasoff
thanks for ur comment
could u make a melody fo it?? Just a try.
Good luck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:01 pm

hi
We like your comments and explanations .Please contact with us and good luck .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:20 am

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:18 am

hi
holla
its gd poem
we have to live our life freely

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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby Lara » Sat Oct 15, 2011 5:13 am

:!!: i hadnt seen this poem till now, it's nice
Well, Shakes i think if anyone loves he/she wouldnt leave his/her beloved, or maybe she had her reasons for doing that, Love always hurts...have u listened to this song "Love Hurts" from Nazareth, i advice u to hear it, c u :-D


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