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FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 08, 2008 7:34 am

FLY TO THE PARADISE

O bird ! spread both of wings in the sky
Fly with the breeze, fly far to the paradise
Embrace white clouds, enjoy before you die
Fly to the peaks of mountains where ice is very nice

* * *
We toil so hard ,days go without return
Really you're now free but you will be slave
And you're vivid too but you'll soon burn
We're stray in a wide sea , like dolls in a violent wave

* * *
Days go ; days come , live merrily don't mind
The happiness will vanish , the sorrow will reign
Sooner or later we'll die and leave the pleasure behind
Want you waste happy times?! I think you're insane


* * *
our life is like a night mare

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweets » Sat Nov 08, 2008 4:52 pm

oh shakespear
so wonderful so great no words can express how those words touch my heart :-)

(Days go ; days come , live merrily don't mind
The happiness will vanish , the sorrow will reign
Sooner or later we'll die and leave the pleasure behind
Want you waste happy times?! I think you're insane)

so lovely in spite of sadness it carries
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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Sun Nov 09, 2008 8:03 am

HI sweet
u r aways the first one who makes comment on my poems and ur comments r very active and give courage to us so i thank u 4 this notes .
do u think i came back to the sad tone?
plz advise me how to leave it and take rid of it!
gdluck friend
c u
our life is like a night mare

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweets » Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:24 pm

well thanx for ur words

u can not change the sadness tone unless u chang ur self url ife in general the way u see life
i know it's hard but maybe it helps u

cheeeeeeeeeeeeeers
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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby Psixochka » Mon Nov 10, 2008 5:13 am

shakespear wrote:FLY TO THE PARADISE
We toil so hard ,days go without return
Really you're now free but you will be slave
And you're vivid too but you'll soon burn
We're stray in a wide sea , like dolls in a violent wave

I like these words. It is close to me, cuz now there is period in my life when I feel sadness often :-? Good job Shakespear :-)
I agree with Sweets that you should change your attitude to life in general, if you want to change the sadness tone. I think that you change your attitude when something really good happen in your life, just believe in it! I believe :-)
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Wed Nov 12, 2008 8:09 am

hi my friend
i like russian people and i thank u on this advice but it`s not up to us that means we can`t be sad or glad koz events affect us
good luck
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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweets » Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:02 pm

hi
i kow what u mean but i think that man can stand and challenge i know its' so hard but trying to live happily is better than standing and blaming our luck

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Fri Nov 14, 2008 11:25 am

hi sweet
i don`t blame my luck or destiny and i think u r right but why can`t we choose our lives or parents or at least our names? why some of us tortured while othes r happy?
u r right that we must show happy even we were sad. but can u make this ,plz answer me frankly .don`t say typical speeche.if u r able to show happiness every time i think u r hero.
c u soon and gd luck
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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweets » Sun Nov 16, 2008 4:56 pm

hello
iam not typical or ideal i have my troubles and sadness moments maybe my life is misrable than u maybe not but i follow a collocail proverb (طنش تعش تنعتش)if we transalte it will be like do not listen or think about every single thing
fouce on big deals

i hope u got me

see u
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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Wed Nov 19, 2008 7:23 am

hi sweet i replied twice but they didn`t reach to the club & don`t know why they didn`t reach.
anyway what i like 2 say that even if we show smile on our lips in spite os our sadness ,our smile will be pale ,faint,dim...koz this smile is not from the heart.
don`t u accept with me?
but at all u r right we must show our happiness although we r sad"وتجلدي للشامتين اريهم----- اني لريب الهر لا اتزعزع"
i think u understand my opinion
gdluck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:48 am

always sad poems
why????
i don`t know
we have to live our life freely

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:17 pm

sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Fri Feb 04, 2011 8:05 pm

farah wrote:always sad poems
why????
i don`t know


what can i do?
it's my style and i hope i can change it but it's imposible
anyway thankx

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweethuman » Tue Jun 07, 2011 7:44 am

I liked the tilte alot ( FLY TO PARADISE). Tnx

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:23 am

hello
thnx alot my friend
i hope we can b friends
have lovely times u and all the readers

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweethuman » Wed Jun 15, 2011 7:11 am

Thanks dear Shakespear,

I really like & appreciate your friendly behavior and nice comments with all the EC members. Be Happy. :-) Yes, we can be friends. :-)

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweets » Wed Jun 15, 2011 6:25 pm

hi sweethuman how are u ?

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Wed Jun 15, 2011 9:41 pm

hi sweet how r u?
nice 2 meet u...................

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweets » Thu Jun 16, 2011 4:26 am

nice to meet u too here after lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng time

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby sweethuman » Thu Jun 16, 2011 6:01 am

shakespear wrote:hi sweet how r u?
nice 2 meet u...................


Assalam-O-Alaikum Dear,

انا بخیر. کیف انتا؟ {-: .

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Re: FLY TO THE PARADISE

Postby shakespear » Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:03 am

hi friend
where r u from sweethuman?
nice 2 meet u here
have nice moments
do u speak arabic really?


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