Your Name

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Aban
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Your Name

Postby Aban » Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:34 pm

Hearing your name forces me to pay attention. Hearing your name makes my eyes widen up. Hearing your name makes my heart go faster. Hearing your name makes me not in need of Oxygen. Hearing your name makes me immune to sadness. hearing your name makes me fly up above. Hearing your name makes me smile. The real thing hearing your name makes me do is whispering "I Love You"


Hope you Like it, it is my first post ever. I'd like to know what you think. {-:

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Psixochka
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Re: Your Name

Postby Psixochka » Fri Mar 20, 2009 3:32 am

Nice poem :-)
Scio me nihil scire. (Latin)
I know, that I know nothing. (By Socrates)

Aban
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Re: Your Name

Postby Aban » Fri Mar 20, 2009 12:33 pm

Thank you so much.
I'm kinda sad for not getting much of replies.


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