Hi! I'm a 23 years old student from Russia, I write poems and recently I tried to write one in English
Could you please check it and write what you think about it?
Good night, my darling, I don't know
How will I spens this night without
Your smiling lips... I miss you so,
But what I feel I can't find out.
And now I see I don't know how
I will exist without reason,
I'm sqeezed and squashed, my beauty, now,
But heart still listens to your breathing...