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i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Tue Jun 30, 2009 9:26 am

One of my dearest friends send me this poem :

Since you do not even think to ask about me
Since even forget to say hi
Since life's days come and go
Do not ask me why I am writing
such things cuz I do not know

I answered her this poem:

Trust me it is true, I tell you no fibs
You're in my heart.. among the ribs
Inside my mind, control my sensations
You chase me, like shadow, to all stations
I don’t need to ask about you, my love
Our life put us on the torture curve
You stream inside veins with my blood
Like a stormy tornado and violent flood
You paralyze my limbs, like a snake-sting
And control me, you break my wing
You're like me lost here and there
And always lament the time in anywhere
Days come, days go, they steal happy times
I won’t ask you why you wrote rhymes
That I know utterly you don't know
But I'll still love you, don't you think so?
our life is like a night mare

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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Tue Jun 30, 2009 7:05 pm

i send my comment to you
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Wed Jul 01, 2009 7:46 am

hola
i've just read ur comment but why u didn't issue it on the club to be read by all?
i'm asking u to do that
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Wed Jul 01, 2009 8:43 am

so you wanna to publish it ok
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:10 pm

thnx
and gd luck 4 all
our life is like a night mare

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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Sun Jul 05, 2009 10:18 am

SHAKI my freind

specail replyes are totally differnt than public one

are you with me in that
where you new comment {-;
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Mon Jul 06, 2009 9:36 am

hi
how r u? miss u
so what did u mean by this? plz explain!
of course u r right and i like ur point of view and i agree with u in advance but i like to know so plz explain
may i meet u on yahoo koz i miss u
c u and gd luck
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Mon Jul 06, 2009 1:52 pm

well
why shall i explain??????????

about meeeting let us leave it for chances

since today iam freeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Tue Jul 07, 2009 6:07 am

ok
let it on chance although i know my chance is bad but its ok
my chance is black in every thing except in water melon its white
c u and gd luck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: i won't ask you

Postby justme » Tue Jul 07, 2009 11:08 am

nice .....
Love is the master key that opens the gates of happiness.

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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Wed Jul 08, 2009 4:39 pm

Dear shaki
i can not say anything snice you fo not want hear except urself and look as victim of fate
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Sat Jul 11, 2009 6:30 am

hola
at last u attacked me but aren't we victims? i and u?i think its the truth. any way u r welcome and i like every thing from u.
let me hear more frome u even attack " the beat of .............is raisin"
c u and have nice day
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:28 pm

if i don't care about u who might care ??????????????

i olny wanna to wake up dear ur 37 how is ur life till now
i know that ihave not the right but ur y friend and i care for you

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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Mon Jul 13, 2009 7:51 am

hello dear
i welcome u
u didn't understand my proverb
c u
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Mon Jul 13, 2009 4:58 pm

it's seems that i do not can u explain it :oops:
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Wed Jul 15, 2009 8:26 am

hello
it seems u'll make me speak arabic"ضرب ال...... مثل الزبيب " i explained it and i'm so sorry to speak arabic hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
how r u?
i'll send u private massage so plz read it
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby sweets » Wed Jul 15, 2009 10:13 am

ur situtaion inspire me to write smth
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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:27 am

hello
i hope so koz u r like firebrand, ember under ashes needs blow of air to blaze so i'm the blow of air,u have to blaze and burn so plz show us ur pearls, ur lovely poems,
i have new poem , and ill issue it later if God permit.
c u and gd luck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: i won't ask you

Postby farah » Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:45 am

salam
ca u tell us who is ur dearest friend?
bye
we have to live our life freely

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Re: i won't ask you

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:53 am

hi
i can't tell u
its secrete
happy day
c u
our life is like a night mare

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Re: i won't ask you

Postby farah » Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:59 am

why u can not???????
you seem you love her??
we have to live our life freely


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