Woman of substance…! June 25, 2009

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saadattahir
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Woman of substance…! June 25, 2009

Postby saadattahir » Tue Jun 30, 2009 6:22 pm

Get up late, doze half of a day.
Set up then a corner to pray.

Slowly alight the worldly steps.
Leisurely choose the days preps.

Switch the channels on the flat.
Comb in hand and favorite hat.

Mercifully a friend gets to ring
Munch an apple to talk a thing

“What to do, if she didn’t call?
Silently he left, again, the gall!

Let’s skip to market, do a day.”
Did with her ilk a blowing foray

Brag and boast, marvels around
If you see, be held dumbfound!

A calc in hand I do the pounds
Has me swim in frothing sounds

Flimsy Itsy bitsy frilly patch,
barely cover the ample thatch!

Out on a thimble put to dry.
Never the angler, net a fry!

“Who had known a girl like that?
And I’ve given you one but eight.

Praises be to my luscious lips,
wits, my smile, my ample hips,

O’ you, peasant’s leftover stuff!
Talk you now, in a voice so gruff,

Then you licked up honey clean,
tell me now, where you have been?

My pa’s the magisterial oversee,
And that the way, I’ll to talk to thee.”

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saadat tahir
(Islamabad)
(June 25, 2009)
Not self but GOD and others.

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Re: Woman of substance…! June 25, 2009

Postby shakespear » Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:20 am

hi saad
although it contains some difficult words but i think its good
plz can u explain it
thnx
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Re: Woman of substance…! June 25, 2009

Postby saadattahir » Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:36 am

actually you could go to any online dictionay and get what u want....still stymed... then send the specific words and we can do em over...

thanx for the comment
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