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i won't ask you

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One of my dearest friends send me this poem :

Since you do not even think to ask about me
Since even forget to say hi
Since life's days come and go
Do not ask me why I am writing
such things cuz I do not know

I answered her this poem:

Trust me it is true, I tell you no fibs
You're in my heart.. among the ribs
Inside my mind, control my sensations
You chase me, like shadow, to all stations
I don’t need to ask about you, my love
Our life put us on the torture curve
You stream inside veins with my blood
Like a stormy tornado and violent flood
You paralyze my limbs, like a snake-sting
And control me, you break my wing
You're like me lost here and there
And always lament the time in anywhere
Days come, days go, they steal happy times
I won’t ask you why you wrote rhymes
That I know utterly you don't know
But I'll still love you, don't you think so?
our life is like a night mare
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i send my comment to you
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hola
i've just read ur comment but why u didn't issue it on the club to be read by all?
i'm asking u to do that
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so you wanna to publish it ok
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thnx
and gd luck 4 all
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SHAKI my freind

specail replyes are totally differnt than public one

are you with me in that
where you new comment {-;
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hi
how r u? miss u
so what did u mean by this? plz explain!
of course u r right and i like ur point of view and i agree with u in advance but i like to know so plz explain
may i meet u on yahoo koz i miss u
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well
why shall i explain??????????

about meeeting let us leave it for chances

since today iam freeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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ok
let it on chance although i know my chance is bad but its ok
my chance is black in every thing except in water melon its white
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nice .....
Love is the master key that opens the gates of happiness.
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Dear shaki
i can not say anything snice you fo not want hear except urself and look as victim of fate
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hola
at last u attacked me but aren't we victims? i and u?i think its the truth. any way u r welcome and i like every thing from u.
let me hear more frome u even attack " the beat of .............is raisin"
c u and have nice day
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if i don't care about u who might care ??????????????

i olny wanna to wake up dear ur 37 how is ur life till now
i know that ihave not the right but ur y friend and i care for you

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hello dear
i welcome u
u didn't understand my proverb
c u
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it's seems that i do not can u explain it :oops:
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hello
it seems u'll make me speak arabic"ضرب ال...... مثل الزبيب " i explained it and i'm so sorry to speak arabic hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
how r u?
i'll send u private massage so plz read it
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ur situtaion inspire me to write smth
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hello
i hope so koz u r like firebrand, ember under ashes needs blow of air to blaze so i'm the blow of air,u have to blaze and burn so plz show us ur pearls, ur lovely poems,
i have new poem , and ill issue it later if God permit.
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salam
ca u tell us who is ur dearest friend?
bye
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hi
i can't tell u
its secrete
happy day
c u
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why u can not???????
you seem you love her??
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hello
its private affairs
if u wanna know her name i have to ask her to accept that
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how long do i have to wait .
plz tell me directly
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hola
i can't tell u and u don't need to wait for that
if u wanna ask me about the poem and the style and the ideas
ok??
have nice moments
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thnankx
plz i want you to teach me some thing about poetry
thankx
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hola
yea anytime
be careful
bye and gdluck
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shakespear wrote:hello
i hope so koz u r like firebrand, ember under ashes needs blow of air to blaze so i'm the blow of air,u have to blaze and burn so plz show us ur pearls, ur lovely poems,
i have new poem , and ill issue it later if God permit.
c u and gd luck
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this is my poem:

Trust me it is true, I tell you no fibs
You're in my heart.. among the ribs
Inside my mind, control my sensations
You chase me, like shadow, to all stations
I don’t need to ask about you, my love
Our life put us on the torture curve
You stream inside veins with my blood
Like a stormy tornado and violent flood
You paralyze my limbs, like a snake-sting
And control me, you break my wing
You're like me lost here and there
And always lament the time in anywhere
Days come, days go, they steal happy times
I won’t ask you why you wrote rhymes
That I know utterly you don't know
But I'll still love you, don't you think so?


this poem has a connection with the last poem " we know" there is similarity between them
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shakespear wrote:
Trust me it is true, I tell you no fibs
You're in my heart.. among the ribs
Inside my mind, control my sensations
You chase me, like shadow, to all stations
I don’t need to ask about you, my love
Our life put us on the torture curve
You stream inside veins with my blood
Like a stormy tornado and violent flood
You paralyze my limbs, like a snake-sting
And control me, you break my wing
You're like me lost here and there
And always lament the time in anywhere
Days come, days go, they steal happy times
I won’t ask you why you wrote rhymes
That I know utterly you don't know
But I'll still love you, don't you think so?
this poem is a reply to one of my dearest friends...not long
our life is like a night mare
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