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a short sentense needs to be check its grammar.

Post by jamestian » Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:22 pm

Dear all:
Could anyone help me to change it into academic style or fix any existed grammartical error ??
The first paragraph in this article explains the process of photosynthesis which means plants capture the sun's energy and use it to convert inorganic compounds into organic compounds.
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Re: a short sentense needs to be check its grammar.

Post by Joe » Tue Mar 16, 2010 7:54 am

The first paragraph in this article explains the process of photosynthesis by which plants capture the sun's energy and use it to convert inorganic compounds into organic compounds.

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Re: a short sentense needs to be check its grammar.

Post by jamestian » Fri Mar 19, 2010 11:32 am

Josef wrote:The first paragraph in this article explains the process of photosynthesis by which plants capture the sun's energy and use it to convert inorganic compounds into organic compounds.
Hi Josef:

About "by which",I should use what key word to find its usage,because I am not familiar with relative clause.
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