Skies of fantasy

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Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:09 pm

2-10-09 Friday-------1:00
Skies of fantasy (سماوات الخيال)
I don't even know who I am, and where to.
You made me, forget my self, you're my balm.
It's a disaster, if I forget you.
You're my rest, my serenity, my calm.
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Even sleeping in a grave, the human doesn't die.
As long as there is someone, remembers him.
Beat me, hurt me, kill me, I won't say why.
But don't banish me away, at your whim.
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Sooner or later, all the masks will fall.
And you'll know that you've loved the enemies.
You're beautiful, but you're just a doll.
When I see you, I become 'n bad stymies.
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From that miserable distant place, I've come.
All the good men, one after one, fell dead.
I swim in skies of fantasy, I'm numb.
The mercy-angel had patted on my head.
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Don't forget me, or our past sweet moments.
Just remember, let me live in your mind.
Don't erase our memories, we live in scents.
Ah my lovely half, like you I can't find.

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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby sweets » Wed Jan 27, 2010 8:01 pm

in spite of date u wrote this one u remind me with one of my oddes(flowen coulds) but i did not publish it since u were not here

i guess u face alot and only u had was dreams to eacape through

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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Wed May 19, 2010 8:16 am

thnx 4 evey things

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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby farah » Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:20 am

:-D :-D :-D FANTASTIC :-D :-D :-D

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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:20 pm

hello
thnx 4 ur comment
hope 2 try writings
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby farah » Sat Sep 04, 2010 5:23 am

Hi
please send me your email
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:01 am

hello
ok but not here koz its not allowed
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:48 pm

hello
farah i sent it
sorry if i was late
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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:21 am

hi

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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 4:08 am

shakespear wrote:It's a disaster, if I forget you.

It's hard to say i cant forget u, but then u dont realize when it happens, so it's not as hard as we have thouhgt... hmm, think about it

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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Tue Sep 13, 2011 11:07 pm

real love won't let loyal lovers forget easily

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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby Lara » Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:52 am

yeah it's not easy, that's what love causes... u r right

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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Thu Sep 15, 2011 9:35 pm

that's well...we agree ...love is not easy..although its like candy in the beginning but when it grows it'll make many troubles to the lovers...it's like drug when we used to get it we can't stop...understood i think

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Re: Skies of fantasy

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:06 am

i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments


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