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mollyyang
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by mollyyang » Mon Oct 04, 2010 9:13 am
What do you think about the essay topic "The Advantages of Living Condition in A Big City"?
What I think about this topic is city's transportation and convenience.
I need more ideas to write this essay, and would really appreciate any ideas of this topic that you share with me. Thanks.

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alawton
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by alawton » Mon Oct 04, 2010 4:52 pm
Hello,
Change your title to: "The Advantages of Living Conditions in A Big City". You will want "conditions" instead of "condition".
You can talk about how there is more to do in a big city in terms of entertainment. There are numerous bars, clubs and coffee shops in all major cities. The music scene is also a lot better in big cities too. Good luck!
Andrew Lawton
http://drewseslfluenceylessons.com