IT IS MY HEART

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IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 14, 2009 9:57 am

It is my heart…….
Don`t ask how! Don`t ask me why!
It`s my soul liking to fly so high
Can`t you see me always I sigh?
I say see you but you used to say bye
___ ____ ____
Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?
___ ____ ____
TO BE CONTINUED
our life is like a night mare

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Sun Apr 19, 2009 3:05 pm

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
shakespear

in my heart i have alot to talk joy sad

you know iam living this situation nowadays and i do not know wether shall we go on or what
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Sun Apr 19, 2009 5:14 pm

to continue what i said before so i decide to go on in my life and you too stop begging for old days go on ur life
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:04 am

hi sweet
i know u`ll be the 1st one who makes comment on the poem and i`m not amazed 4 that ....although u were late but its ok
we debated this matter about sadness and happiness and i said it again we can`t live in a certain mood or state we r obliged to be sad or happy
thnx 4 the comment
our life is like a night mare

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Mon Apr 20, 2009 4:36 pm

hello

well iknow i am late but i did not come here for along time
about debate as you said we talked much about
i can not change ur feeelings or change ur mind

but i hope to find ur way soooooooooooon

cu
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 21, 2009 11:59 am

hi
i think u can`t chnge the idea but i feel happy to talk with u and to debate on anything thnx 4 ur prayer to me and i hope god bless u and get u rid from occupationg
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Tue Apr 21, 2009 1:37 pm

same feelings towards you {-;
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 27, 2009 12:16 pm

hi and thnx
i think we r similar and have the same opinions axcept the subjects concerning with optinistic and pessimistic views
our life is like a night mare

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby farah » Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:34 am

hi
where is the complete?
i will wait for it
c u
we have to live our life freely

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:03 am

hello
i don't know y i forget it
so i'll think about it hard and u'll c the complete just wait 4 me plz
gd luck
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:43 pm

shakespear wrote:It is my heart…….
Don`t ask how! Don`t ask me why!
It`s my soul liking to fly so high
Can`t you see me always I sigh?
I say see you but you used to say bye
___ ____ ____
Tell me the truth, don`t lie on me!
Did you still love me and keep my heart`s key?
Did you forget our vivid love at the sea?
Call me an` you`ll see me creep on knee
Isn`t enough to stay with me and …
Water our love tree?
___ ____ ____
TO BE CONTINUED


i can't complete it so i ask u to help me completing
thnx

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:19 pm

hi i wish i didn't issue this poem but its now part of me , of my personality.. so its ok..
i couldn't end it, i don't know why?

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby manal » Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:24 pm

hi....
i am not surprizing what i feel now........it is a poem of SHAKESPEARE...
be as slow as u like friend...we r Eagerly waiting.

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby muruganji » Sat Jul 09, 2011 6:45 pm

Dear Shakes,

The real love never fails

Why i call shakes when others are calling you shaki, because, You can shake her mind when you are in true

Be confident, your vibration can change when it is true

I wished to advice to Both of you don't try to play with each other

I can assure about her like she is a pure water, innocent, her heart is beautiful, so she is definately beautiful.If you going to cheat her, God will punish and you will feel it.

Murugan

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:40 am

I dont want to add anything to it Shakespear, It is all about your feelings so I am waiting for your comments and opinions.

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby muruganji » Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:05 pm

Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Sun Jul 17, 2011 5:06 am

muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan



Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Sun Jul 17, 2011 4:05 pm

sweethuman wrote:
muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan


Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:



[color=#BF0000]i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby shakespear » Sun Jul 17, 2011 10:01 pm

hi sweets
thnx 4 ur interest
have nice moments

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweethuman » Mon Jul 18, 2011 8:09 am

sweets wrote:
sweethuman wrote:
muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

Still you are not replying to my Post

waiting

I know sweethuman who she is?

she think, I do not know about her.

murugan


Yes Dear Murugan,
Please share it with me as well (the secrets of shakes). :lol:



[color=#BF0000]i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
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That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member :twisted:

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Re: IT IS MY HEART

Postby sweets » Mon Jul 18, 2011 4:04 pm

[color=#BF0000]i refuse to talk about shakespear or her in this way :evil: :evil: plz. respcet their privacy
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That is your personal concept and idiology. Every human is born with different mind and ideas. A person should never forcefully implement ones concepts on others. Respect each and single idea of every member :twisted:[/quote][/quote]

sweethuman
i do not mind to express ur ideas i respcet that but i think that everybody have the right of privacy
that's all


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