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Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 6:10 am

SOUL SELLER
Truly, I gained gold?
For my soul I sold
Everything will be sweet
I don't mind real heat
As you possess wealth
What is –then- health
Let me live my day
Every second I feel gay
Everything will be sweet
I don't mind real heat
I feel the world is mine
And for my sake sun will shine
Hard I sold my past
From him I run very fast
Go soul, go past, go torture
Quickly, I'll travel into future
Bye, bye poverty for ever
I won't return, never..never
our life is like a night mare

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Re: SOUL SELLER-p

Postby denvinbo » Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:12 am

Uhm.....a bit scare..........there's something deep in your poem........... :)
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Postby Krisi » Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:09 pm

:shock: what a style!!! :shock: (horror)

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Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:48 am

Hi evereyone.There is no herror in my poem . Thanks .
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Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:49 am

Thanks a lot to everyone and good luck . :) :) :) :)
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Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:25 am

Hi Krisi,
Krisi wrote::shock: what a style!!! :shock: (horror)

I want to know your opinion about my poems . Good luck.
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Postby shakespear » Wed May 14, 2008 8:34 am

Hi krisi
Really I miss ur nice comments
Bye
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Postby shakespear » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:38 am

hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
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Postby sweets » Wed Jun 25, 2008 5:21 pm

hi
it's a new style i really like this style i could not find words how my feeling are now maybe when i read it deeply i can tell

well about ur question"why do we forget to read or to write"

for me my writes comes when i can not stand situations around me so i write as a way to relax but when i read it againe i discover that i did not talk about the feeling i really live in

about reading i always forget what i read that made a diffecult in my study but i beleive that the thing that u read and love it form depth of ur heart hard to be forgeted

i hope that i answered ur question

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Postby shakespear » Thu Jun 26, 2008 5:07 am

hi sweet
i think u relax my sadnees or at least some of them
thnx
c u soon
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Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:11 pm

hi
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we always turn our head towards the past but it doesn`t come back to us .it runs as fast as a train.
let`s live our happy days
good luck
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Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:17 am

hi everyone and goodluck
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Re: SOUL SELLER-p

Postby farah » Sat Feb 28, 2009 2:00 pm

hi
i think its good
we have to live our life freely

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Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:38 pm

sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx

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Postby Aimee » Fri Oct 22, 2010 12:49 pm

You are amazing Shakespear. This name really suits you. I am really impressed. Also i need your help to become a good writer.

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Postby shakespear » Tue Oct 26, 2010 6:41 pm

hello friend
u r welcome and i'm ready to help u its my pleasure to help my friends
thnx 4 ur comments
c u and have lovely times

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Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 06, 2011 3:02 pm

hi Aimee
where r u ?
i'm waiting 4 u... u didn't contact me really i like to help each other
c u

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Re: SOUL SELLER-p

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:34 am

all my poems r pieces of my memories.autobiography so all of them i like

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Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:52 am

Yes shakespear, when we wanna leave all our bad memories, it's so difficult, but to do it we must rid ourselves of everything that affects us and let them go, and start again!

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Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:09 am

soul seller doesn't care 4 the hell so he sells his soul to the satan...he hates his poverty ..past he just like gold and richness...money

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Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:13 am

that's on the earth, but waht about in hell? would he be happy in hell?


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