when we love!

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when we love!

Postby manar » Wed Jan 05, 2011 9:01 am

when we are in love,
we are happy,
we are sweet,
we are calm,
and we are strong.


It is too easy to fall in love,

it is too easy to feel love,
it is too easy to give love,
it is too easy to share love,
it is too easy to give sacrifice for the sake of love,
it is too difficult to find the one who deserve your love.

Being in love is a nice dream that we do not want to wake up from,
it is that emotion which makes you feel as if you are a king,
who has a wonderful kingdom to rule,
and a charming garden to lay in,
that is your beloved heart,soul and lap.

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Re: when we love!

Postby manar » Wed Jan 05, 2011 12:38 pm

Hello every body,
it is my first attempt in writing creative writing,
so ,please write ur comment

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Re: when we love!

Postby Vega » Thu Jan 06, 2011 6:52 pm

I liked it. Thank you! You must be in love with someone, right? :-)

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Re: when we love!

Postby manar » Thu Jan 06, 2011 10:32 pm

hello vega,
first ,thank u for ur nice comment, {-:
with regard to ur quoistion,i say:
mmmmmmmmmmmm , may be yes,may be no,
the only certain thing is that he isnot the suitable one ;-)

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Re: when we love!

Postby sweets » Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:37 am

hi manar and nice odd but i don't agree with u about (It is too easy to fall in love) in same time i agree about (it is too difficult to find the one who deserve your love.) coz it so hard to find true and honst love nowadays

but i's so sure like what vega said ur or were in love dear

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Re: when we love!

Postby manar » Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:51 am

hello sweets,
thanks a lot for ur comment,
i beliv that if we meet the suitable one in the suitable time ,it becomes too easy to feel love.
sometimes we misanderstand people and we make ideals from them in the time they r not and after falling in love with them we discover the bitter truth.
Either being in love or not i not sure ,he is not the suitable one and that is enough to stop thinking of him anymore.

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Re: when we love!

Postby sweets » Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:03 pm

well everyone have personal ideas about love

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Re: when we love!

Postby manar » Tue Jan 18, 2011 3:33 pm

hi sweets,
can u summarise ur personal view about love?

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Re: when we love!

Postby sweets » Wed Jan 19, 2011 9:59 am

tell me urs first

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Re: when we love!

Postby manar » Wed Jan 19, 2011 12:25 pm

hi sweets,
in fact i asked u to summarise ur view about love,in the time i believe it is a very difficult test
to summarise such a lofty feeling,but if i try.......
mmm...Sacrifice with ones desires for the sake of the beloved , even if these desires is being
in touch with them!
i wish u get it,
now tell me urs .

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Re: when we love!

Postby sweets » Wed Jan 19, 2011 4:56 pm

for me love means respect before anything else
love means sharing someone moments wether good o bad
love means supporting and giving without regret
this is what i'm looking for manar

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Re: when we love!

Postby manar » Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:14 am

i wish u find what u look for very soon,
how nice it is to find the trustful person who shares u his soul.

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Re: when we love!

Postby ArnauEstanyol » Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:43 am

It can tell about love that who truly loves someone, never asks for anything and always gives everything.
How describe what oneself feel when fall in love?. It's very difficult. The best is experience.
First it's a storm of fire. When years go by it's a deep sea in calm and finally two persons in love become in only one think, only one will, only one soul.

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Re: when we love!

Postby manal » Sat Jan 22, 2011 7:38 pm

hello every 1,and thanks ArnauEstanyol for the nice words u told us about ur view about love
to live as one will and one soul,how romantic it is.

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Re: when we love!

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 01, 2011 7:32 pm

hello
its not our choice to love bad one or good one.... i think its our heart's choice koz sometimes we love one whom not deserve our love but we love him or her... our heart follows the beloved even if he or she bad and severe
its my point of view
u have lovely topic manal
have good luck u and our great friend sweet
c u all soon

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Re: when we love!

Postby manal » Fri Feb 04, 2011 6:46 pm

u r right shakespear i agree with u,mmmmmmmmm u r a poet even in prose {-;


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