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You’re my happiness

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You’re my happiness

The moon, with the stars, has just danced merrily.
In the sky, for me, in the soft night.
The trees have swayed, the birds have sung happily.
The chance has smiled; I've loved at the first sight
------------------------------------ (1)
I'd loved you before even I saw you.
Our souls met, in that old, eternal world.
My heart beats with your name, and it'll still do.
If you expel me, in hell, I'll be hurled.
------------------------------------ (2)
I can see just you, and hear just your voice.
I say your name, in my waking and sleep.
My friends blamed me, but I have no choice.
Your love is my fate, carved in my far deep.
------------------------------------- (3)
You sent your aid Cupid, hold his arrow.
He darted my heart, let me bedridden.
Couldn't he convey me to you? Break his bow?
I need you, to remove my wound, my sin.
-------------------------------------- (4)
Take me in your arms, and cravingly tug!
Bring me closer to you, kiss me on lips!
Don’t leave me a second, please tightly hug!
Let me live sweet love, with your lovely nips!
--------------------------------------- (5)
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welome back my freind after this long time


what i'm sure that u didnot lose ur magical touch inspite of ur ubsent

it's full of hope that dreamy sweety hope

waiting more and more

cu
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hello
u r so fast
thnx and u'll read more and more
c u
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shakespear wrote:You’re my happiness

The moon, with the stars, has just danced merrily.
In the sky, for me, in the soft night.
The trees have swayed, the birds have sung happily.
The chance has smiled; I've loved at the first sight
------------------------------------ (1)
I'd loved you before even I saw you.
Our souls met, in that old, eternal world.
My heart beats with your name, and it'll still do.
If you expel me, in hell, I'll be hurled.
------------------------------------ (2)
I can see just you, and hear just your voice.
I say your name, in my waking and sleep.
My friends blamed me, but I have no choice.
Your love is my fate, carved in my far deep.
------------------------------------- (3)
You sent your aid Cupid, hold his arrow.
He darted my heart, let me bedridden.
Couldn't he convey me to you? Break his bow?
I need you, to remove my wound, my sin.
-------------------------------------- (4)
Take me in your arms, and cravingly tug!
Bring me closer to you, kiss me on lips!
Don’t leave me a second, please tightly hug!
Let me live sweet love, with your lovely nips!
--------------------------------------- (5)
i think you are great but to whom you wrote this poem?
i think she must be happy.
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farah wrote:
shakespear wrote:You’re my happiness

The moon, with the stars, has just danced merrily.
In the sky, for me, in the soft night.
The trees have swayed, the birds have sung happily.
The chance has smiled; I've loved at the first sight
------------------------------------ (1)
I'd loved you before even I saw you.
Our souls met, in that old, eternal world.
My heart beats with your name, and it'll still do.
If you expel me, in hell, I'll be hurled.
------------------------------------ (2)
I can see just you, and hear just your voice.
I say your name, in my waking and sleep.
My friends blamed me, but I have no choice.
Your love is my fate, carved in my far deep.
------------------------------------- (3)
You sent your aid Cupid, hold his arrow.
He darted my heart, let me bedridden.
Couldn't he convey me to you? Break his bow?
I need you, to remove my wound, my sin.
-------------------------------------- (4)
Take me in your arms, and cravingly tug!
Bring me closer to you, kiss me on lips!
Don’t leave me a second, please tightly hug!
Let me live sweet love, with your lovely nips!
--------------------------------------- (5)
i think you are great but to whom you wrote this poem?
i think she must be happy.
hi farah long time since u appear is it strange that u appear at same time that shakespear appear???????????????????????????????

now shakespear will u tell us to whome this poem is?
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Hi shakespear
how are u?
nice poems you write...i liked them
and in the same time it is nice to meet a person from Iraq here
all my respect for all Iraq's people
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hi
thnx 4 ur kind emotion
i'm very happy 2 be ur friend
c u
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hello all
plz show me ur comment
c u
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It is something that do in hearts what magic do in life,

of course i mean ur emotional words

best wishes for u
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I congratulate you! :-)
Your poem has been chosen as a winner of the Inspirational Post Of The Month Contest.


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congratualtion shekspear u really deserve it
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hello thnx my friend but really i don't know wt happened... so im waiting u to inform me
c u
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hi i'm here right now
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hello thnx my friend but really i don't know wt happened... so im waiting u to inform me
c u
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See the 1st page. )
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hello
i'm so sorry i didn't know that it was appear
sorry again
good luck 4 all
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hi
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shakespear wrote:If you expel me, in hell, I'll be hurled.
Hi :) it's so wonderful,when anyone is in loved every word he/she says is just wonderful..
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Lara wrote: Hi :) it's so wonderful,when anyone is in loved every word he/she says is just wonderful..

i think u r right....thnx 4 explainning
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hello my friends
have nice moments
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shakespear wrote:You’re my happiness

The moon, with the stars, has just danced merrily.
In the sky, for me, in the soft night.
The trees have swayed, the birds have sung happily.
The chance has smiled; I've loved at the first sight
------------------------------------ (1)
I'd loved you before even I saw you.
Our souls met, in that old, eternal world.
My heart beats with your name, and it'll still do.
If you expel me, in hell, I'll be hurled.
------------------------------------ (2)
I can see just you, and hear just your voice.
I say your name, in my waking and sleep.
My friends blamed me, but I have no choice.
Your love is my fate, carved in my far deep.
------------------------------------- (3)
You sent your aid Cupid, hold his arrow.
He darted my heart, let me bedridden.
Couldn't he convey me to you? Break his bow?
I need you, to remove my wound, my sin.
-------------------------------------- (4)
Take me in your arms, and cravingly tug!
Bring me closer to you, kiss me on lips!
Don’t leave me a second, please tightly hug!
Let me live sweet love, with your lovely nips!
--------------------------------------- (5)

old poem
our life is like a night mare
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