Ode from inside a jail

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:34 pm

hello
this poem reminds me the days in the jail, although they were hateful days but they will stay in mind and won't disappear and i can't forget them. there is always sth which reminds u that.
i wanna just express my feelings.
forgive me

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Sun Feb 13, 2011 12:47 pm

REALLY U WAS IN THE JAIL
OHHHHHHH
U WAS SUFFERING IF U WAS IN THE JAIL

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:37 pm

yes i was in it and i suffered from that and i'm still suffering
god save me and all my friends

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby manal » Thu Feb 17, 2011 7:17 pm

woooooooooo,
i thought i read all of ur poems,but i missed this,
how great u r,u convey me in a moment from world to another,thanx.

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 20, 2011 7:44 pm

hello
u r welcome and i thnx u 4 these comments , u seem so kind and soft. really i wish u read all my poems and send me ur point of view about my writings. we all learn and learn and one can't stop learing koz that refers to stopping the life and means death....
plz read and send me ur comments
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby manal » Mon Feb 21, 2011 5:46 am

u r welcome,
there is a saying that "the great person is great untill s/he thinks s/he is great",
one has to learn to the last moment of his/her life,u r right,thnx :-D

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Mon Feb 21, 2011 11:30 am

hello
yes u r the person is so great unless that person claims the knowledge, in that moment s/he becomes ignorant and no more educated, koz s/he will stop searching and learning.
really i thought u r so educated and i invite u to try writing poems or short storied koz i think u can
thnx and hope lovely times

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby manal » Mon Feb 21, 2011 1:42 pm

u get the idea,
i thank ur invitation very much ,in fact u r motivating me,thanx.
i like writing poems and stories,but it depends on my mood {-;
i will try to have something new very soon ,and u of course will be the supervisor of me {-;
thanx again for regarding me as an educated person,it means a lot for me,that shakespear says so.

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Mon Feb 21, 2011 3:45 pm

u r welcome and i'll be so happy to be ur helper in writing sth, just start any thing and u'll find urself making something great ...u'll find ur self making great work and u'll be proud of that..i'm sure u can but first put the idea infront of ur face and hold the pen and write what is inside ur deeps then ur pen won't stop .......thnx, u inspired me 2 say these lovely words and advices..
good luck

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby manal » Mon Feb 21, 2011 6:15 pm

hi,
i promise that u will read a new thing by me as soon as possible,and thank u for every thing.
have nice moments.

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 22, 2011 7:34 pm

hello
i tried to write but i can't , i know that i have something to write about but i can't now ...y??????? i don't know y ? may be its koz of not holding the pen. poems inside our souls are like volvano, u can't excite it unless magma and melted things inside it boil, in that time the volcano excite and its magma will flow , our soul is like the volcano and the poems are like this magma so we have not to oblige our selves to write a poem.
thnx and have lovely times

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:01 pm

Hellooooooooo
i read this comment in your new subject with some changs but i think it is good
good luck

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:17 pm

hello
yes that's right i issued it in separate topic.thnx 4 this soft comment and have nice moments

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Mon Feb 28, 2011 4:25 pm

HELLO
I WANT TO WRITE SOMETHING BUT I CANNOT PLEASE CAN U HELP ME IN WTITING A POEM?
MY REGARDS AND PLEASE READ MY LETTER IN YOUR BOX IN ENGLISH CLUB AND ANSWER ME.
THANKS

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Wed May 11, 2011 7:53 am

hi
listen
poems can't be written by friends and by helping one another, i know one can help another by encoruging but to teach him how to write a poem , really i don't know
have nice moments

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby xtragirl » Thu May 12, 2011 11:49 am

Hmm.. My comment for now, it's so good and touch my heart..
You know, I feel that I'm in that jail..
Imagine for what I will do..
So far with someone I love..
So sad..

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sat May 14, 2011 6:26 am

hello
thnx .......
really u encouraged me with these lovley words and i hope u send more comments about other poems.......
u seem so good in this comment and i hope u try to write poems or any literatur writing
c u
my best wishes

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Lara » Mon Aug 01, 2011 3:06 pm

hi :) Shakespear, i already told u i loved this poem. I hope you do not miss this great gift that you have to write poems, and God continue giving you lots of inspiration. Bye

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Fri Aug 05, 2011 7:08 am

hi lara and thnx
so am i
hope not to lose this gift of God...pray 4 me to get inspiration
thanx again

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Tue Jun 11, 2013 12:51 pm

hi all my friends....some thing reminds me this poem...really i like it much....koz its part of my personality...
have lovely time...
c u
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Elisa » Thu Jun 13, 2013 4:02 pm

Have you been in a jail?


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