what does beautiful mean? [The Contest WINNER, May. 2011]

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what does beautiful mean? [The Contest WINNER, May. 2011]

Postby Dylis » Tue May 17, 2011 3:40 pm

what's mean 'beautiful' to you?
is it 'pretty', or is it 'true'?
or maybe just someone you knew

someone you keep falling for
who didn't want to open their door
someone you couldn't ignore

what's mean 'beautiful' to him?
is it 'kind', or is it 'slim'?
or maybe just someone friendly

a person he loved back then
someone he felt for again
a person he only wanted to accept

what's mean 'beautiful' to her?
is it 'smart', or is it 'better'?
or maybe just people who matter

boys and girls that would never betray
smiling persons who did not run away
faces which are there today

when you remember someone you miss
a person you really wanted to kiss
tell me, just tell me, what 'beautiful' is.

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Re: what does beautiful mean?

Postby sweets » Tue May 17, 2011 5:44 pm

ur poems are powerful now ur dicussing what beautiful means
for me beautiful is pure

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Re: what does beautiful mean?

Postby sweethuman » Wed May 18, 2011 11:07 am

Beautiful for me means Kind, friendly and and romantic

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Re: what does beautiful mean? [The Contest WINNER, May. 2011

Postby sweets » Sun May 29, 2011 8:22 pm

congratualtion

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Re: what does beautiful mean? [The Contest WINNER, May. 2011

Postby Dylis » Mon Jun 06, 2011 7:30 pm

Thanks a lot! :-)


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