My Beginning and My End

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My Beginning and My End

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My Beginning and My End

Your love is as deep as the ocean
My heart explode every time I see you
I can’t say any word when I’m with you
You aren’t a dream, you are inevitable

You know I wish you with sincerity
Our love is brighter than the sunlight
Every hug of you is like a warm breeze,
That makes me feel protected and loved

Our love is stronger than a storm in the ocean
God sent you as an answer to all my questions
You are my destiny, we both become one
Our feelings can’t be stopped by any human

Love makes the shadow in my heart turns clear
Your love fills my life with hope and dreams
You turn my nightmares into wonderful dreams
My hardness became as soft as cotton

Without you life is full of melancholy
Your love is like the cosmos, it doesn’t have end
You wake up the capacity to love I had slept
Now I'm willing to love with all my heart

You were as a pill which ended with my heartache
You came just in time to save me from this pain
You are the cure for my disease, you are my relief
With you I realized that I can love again

Before you came my life was full of bitter thoughts
Now every thought has to do with love and happiness
You are honey and sweeten my life with your sweetness
your charm completely changed my lifestyle

You quench my thirst like a cloudburst in the desert
You taught me what love is, you taught how to love
You’re like a drug that makes me feel unexplained feelings
Our love has no limits; you are my beginning and my end
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Lara wrote: Your love is as deep as the ocean
My heart explode every time I see you
I can’t say any word when I’m with you
You aren’t a dream, you are inevitable
u r poetess and i wana greet u for this soft poem
ur words make one live in distant world , make one close eyes and dream....
go ahead u r fantastic
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shakespear wrote:ur words make one live in distant world , make one close eyes and dream....
go ahead u r fantastic
Hi Shakespear {-: u know i like ur comments, they motivate me, I appreciate ur friendship and thanks for that, c u :)
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the whole poem is great one i have nothing to comment about
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Hi Sweets, thanks for ur comment :)
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