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AN ANGEL ON EARTH

What a lovely face shinning with youth
What sensitive depths of charming smile
What a holy beauty, I live in its truth
An angel brought me to a burning pile
I loved her since I met her in the booth
My love increased after I read her file
………………………………………………..(1)
"Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot"
"And say a lovely poem on our story"
"Let me feel your love, do you care or not?"
"Add me to the high state of the glory"
"Keep me close, no water the rose will rot"
I've mentioned you and I won't be sorry
………………………………………………………….(2)
Wake or sleep I say your name every time
You coddle me and call me with alias name
"Sweetie" and other names, all have that chime
And I coddle you, I always do the same
Angel You took me back to my past prime
Your love gave me happiness, and gave me fame
…………………………………………………………….(3)
A mole on a rosy cheek stole my mind
And put me in a puzzlement, that faint mole
Red berry on lips and neck of a hind
Your Eyes are as pearls, they relax my tired soul
On your cheeks I read holy words and find
When can I reach my desire and my goal?
………………………………………………………….(4)
You asked me to say your name in my poem
Can't you find out your name? I've just said it
For your sake, I'm ready to leave my home
And follow you, to enjoy your soft wit
To Lima of Peru or even to Rome
Save you to me, and all things can not fit
………………………………………………………………(5)
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dear freind

you are in love no doubt about that {-: {-: {-: you know i'm so happy for you do you know why ????? because this love made a strong transition form sadness and glomy ideas to sun to shine and let open your arms to life again as if your alive again . how i know that ?? just compare bwtween old and new poems and see the differance {-;

really love do mericals

i really hope that this love make u shiny 4ever

it's nice ..soft poem i like it

have sweety day
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thnx sweets 4 this comment and i hope hear sth new from u
have nice day
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shakespear wrote:"Keep me close, no water the rose will rot"
when i read the poem, I loved this phrase

Shakespear! What a nice poem
Someone who is really in love, leaves anything to be with his/her love, and it seems you are, then do not give up and fight for that love, c u :)
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thnx
we all have 2 fight for our love's sake and we don't have 2 stop or feel defeated koz if we fell once we must stand thousand times
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That's right friend :)
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thnx friend
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shakespear wrote:thnx sweets 4 this comment and i hope hear sth new from u
have nice day

well i cought some ideas ......and collected words form here and there ..... lines wrote lines easre

but nothing complete yet

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ok let's see ur new poem ...really we all hope u not stop writing koz u r good poetess
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maybe 'll post next week but do not expect much
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hi friend i am sure u can make much so i won't expect ...i'm sure u'll make much
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sweets wrote:maybe 'll post next week but do not expect much
u promised ....so where is ur post????
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shakespear wrote:AN ANGEL ON EARTH

"Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot"
"And say a lovely poem on our story"
"Let me feel your love, do you care or not?"
"Add me to the high state of the glory"
"Keep me close, no water the rose will rot"
I've mentioned you and I won't be sorry
what means this??????????????????

think carefully plz...............
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Hi again Shakespear!!!
hmmm....I think as she said "no water the rose will rot", she depends on u, perhaps u have in ur hands her heart, it depends on u, she depends on u. Also she said :"Let me feel your love, do you care or not?" here, i think she also wanna have ur heart, but that is up to you.
Am i right? :~: C U
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listen
she asked to mention her ..this is in the first line..."Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot"
in the last line i said...I've mentioned you and I won't be sorry
sorry wt means that??????????????????
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humm i thing i didnt get what u meant, but i'll try again... :roll:
Well in this case she wanned a proof, she needed a proof that you love her, that's why she asked that, and this is a nice proof of love that anyone can do for his/her beloved. But i think it's not neccesary that anyone asks his/her beloved to write a poem, because if his/her beloved loves her/him so much, it's his duty to write one, without asking it.
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hi
u ddn't get it again
in last line i confirmed that i mentioned her name so discover where i had mentioned her...

:-D can u?
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hmmmm... :roll: the only word which is a name is "Angel", yes the name u mentioned is Angel. I hope to be right...like the Robbie Willians song; "Angels" :-D
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lara did you his angel or not yet????????????????????????
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i mentioned another name and its the same but another word...
ok dont worry about that...
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Shakes...I almost guess it,,,sure in the next one i will... :lol:

Hi Sweets :-D ....sorry sis, but i didnt get ur question, c u :)
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goodmorning lara
i wanna tell u (read poem carefully and u'll got her name ) for me i got it (:
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Hello Sweets, thanks :-D , but at last i could do it, it was difficult; this because i dont know arabic, but stating that it isnt an excuse. :lol:
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Lara wrote:Hello Sweets, thanks :-D , but at last i could do it, it was difficult; this because i dont know arabic, but stating that it isnt an excuse. :lol:
hi lara
as u said it's not a excuse :lol: .........maybe in his new poem u'll got her name try to dig well next time {-;
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sweets wrote:maybe in his new poem u'll got her name
:!!: :!!: :!!:
Terrible wrong in grammar sweets you can't use " can +past tense" so be careful in the next time friend..
have nice moments
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WONDERFUL POEM....I KNOW HOW U MENTIONED HER NAME IN THIS POEM...THE NAME IS THE SAME TITLE , TEALLY GTEAT.
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farah wrote:TEALLY GTEAT.
wt means this???
but thnx 4 this comment...
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shakespear wrote:AN ANGEL ON EARTH

What a lovely face shinning with youth
What sensitive depths of charming smile
What a holy beauty, I live in its truth
An angel brought me to a burning pile
I loved her since I met her in the booth
My love increased after I read her file
………………………………………………..(1)
"Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot"
"And say a lovely poem on our story"
"Let me feel your love, do you care or not?"
"Add me to the high state of the glory"
"Keep me close, no water the rose will rot"
I've mentioned you and I won't be sorry
………………………………………………………….(2)
Wake or sleep I say your name every time
You coddle me and call me with alias name
"Sweetie" and other names, all have that chime
And I coddle you, I always do the same
Angel You took me back to my past prime
Your love gave me happiness, and gave me fame
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A mole on a rosy cheek stole my mind
And put me in a puzzlement, that faint mole
Red berry on lips and neck of a hind
Your Eyes are as pearls, they relax my tired soul
On your cheeks I read holy words and find
When can I reach my desire and my goal?
………………………………………………………….(4)
You asked me to say your name in my poem
Can't you find out your name? I've just said it
For your sake, I'm ready to leave my home
And follow you, to enjoy your soft wit
To Lima of Peru or even to Rome
Save you to me, and all things can not fit
………………………………………………………………(5)

i mentioned her in the 2nd stanza...discover
our life is like a night mare
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RENEW OLD POEMS
our life is like a night mare
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