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(this is m first poem after almost a year .. ..)


how hard to cry without tears
how hard to go without return
how hard to feel annoyed and no one to share
how hard to speak voiceless ..


to live and wait your death
to live inside bubble
without freind ..without lover
and feel that joy will never come
discovered you get a pain and no one to cure

how hard to say hi ..... how easy to say bye
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to live and wait your death
to live inside bubble
without freind ..without lover
and feel that joy will never come


welcome friend...its marvelous poem and i wana congratulate u koz u come back.....
really lovely lines and i hope to write more and more...have lovely times
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thanx dear but i do not knw i feel it needs much to work on what do you think ?
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Dear Sweets

No use

A female's tears can thin (dilute) a stone- It is Indian Proverb

Do not look back, go forward, bright future is waiting for you

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muruganji wrote:Dear Sweets

No use

A female's tears can thin (dilute) a stone- It is Indian Proverb

Do not look back, go forward, bright future is waiting for you

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you can not change my mind
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sweets wrote: how hard to cry without tears
how hard to go without return
how hard to feel annoyed and no one to share
how hard to speak voiceless ..
almost everything on earth is inevitable,everything has its consequences whether good or bad.
Nice poem :)
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thanx dear 4 ur comment have a sweet day
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no more comments or wht?????????
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hi friend
sometimes simple words can express lots of meanings and sometimes we don't speak but we show lots of meaning...
have nice moments
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i do not knw when u check our old poems (you and me ) we had much to comment to talk sometimes we comment in poetry we were like fire & butterfly do you remember those days i really miss them at least i found a reason to write to comment a sense of challenge

i guess u got bored or sometimehing like that
wht do you think??????
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i can't live without poetry and poems and i didn't feel bored and i miss those past day more than u koz i find my activness in comments but u r often not here and i tried to see ur comments and poems but nothing...anyway i hope i can see ur comments and poems ....those strong poems as i knew u ..active and poetess....
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u knw that iam missing that more than u so let us have a fresh start with new poetic flames let us fire this fourm as we were waiting 4 u
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ok sweets
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heyyyy
i won't post any new poem till i read urs so huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuury up
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