The Feeling of Love
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We are complete strangers in a bubble
We are trapped and alone with no escape
There is no entry or exit, why are we here?
We don’t choose who we’ll love, it just happens
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We can not run away our fate; it’s in front of us
A new love story is about to begin, we can’t deny
This love story is already written, it’s God’s will
We are the main characters in there, the actors
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We were taken to a bubble, a new world
Now our will is to stay here forever
Outside, reality is killing human beings
They hurt each other; it’s a world full of pain
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Our bubble is our protector, it’s a wall
This barrier that surrounds us is called love
It is the purest feeling created by God
Love makes our boundaries are limitless
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You make all the darkness in my life shine
Our feelings destroy all types of storm
There’s no outside force that can beat them
Only you and I can live it, and that's our love
The feeling of Love
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Re: The feeling of Love
really we can't choose our destiny and we r like birds in traps so we can't escape...i think it factLara wrote:We are complete strangers in a bubble
We are trapped and alone with no escape
There is no entry or exit, why are we here?
We don’t choose who we’ll love, it just happens
i chose this stanza koz i feel its real and exprsses lots of meanings
really lovely poem and has high expressions
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that's right we can't decide our destiny or the person whom we wll love. im thanksful for u comment :) byeshakespear wrote:really we can't choose our destiny and we r like birds in traps so we can't escape...
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Re: The feeling of Love
hello lara
well i think when people fall in love they be stranger even to themselves people totally change when they fall in love i like your description that love is like bubble.
it's simply happen
thanx for this sweet poem
well i think when people fall in love they be stranger even to themselves people totally change when they fall in love i like your description that love is like bubble.
it's simply happen
thanx for this sweet poem
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sweets wrote:when people fall in love they be stranger even to themselves people totally change when they fall in love
I am grateful for your comment Sweets :) i always take them into account, thank u!! bye
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hi friends
love is like bubble.....i don't think so koz bubble vanishes soon while love perhaps lasts for centuries...so the smilie isn't in its place....i meant the true love but if u meant the false love or the desire,libido,lust, appetite so its the same thing...koz all these, i meant, libido, appetite, lust, don't last long....we can find in coitus and lovemaking....
i just wanted to show my point of view..
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love is like bubble.....i don't think so koz bubble vanishes soon while love perhaps lasts for centuries...so the smilie isn't in its place....i meant the true love but if u meant the false love or the desire,libido,lust, appetite so its the same thing...koz all these, i meant, libido, appetite, lust, don't last long....we can find in coitus and lovemaking....
i just wanted to show my point of view..
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Shakespear!!!! I meant true love, sorry but this time i dont agree with u because, if u didnt notice in the poem i said :
" Our bubble is our protector, it’s a wall
This barrier that surrounds us is called love
It is the purest feeling created by God
Love makes our boundaries are limitless"
That bubble is the LOVE (true love) which is surrounds the couple.
" Our bubble is our protector, it’s a wall
This barrier that surrounds us is called love
It is the purest feeling created by God
Love makes our boundaries are limitless"
That bubble is the LOVE (true love) which is surrounds the couple.
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i don't agree with u also in this say koz bubble represents our appetite, lust, not the true love which can last for ever...think about it little and u'll find that bubble can last even if we take care of it....nothing in this life is like true love...i think so
i don't agree with u also in this say koz bubble represents our appetite, lust, not the true love which can last for ever...think about it little and u'll find that bubble can last even if we take care of it....nothing in this life is like true love...i think so
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Ok friend :D, all we have different point of view about what true love is, and in this case we will never agree, i know that "false love or the desire,libido,lust, appetite" wont never last forever, but i didnt talk about false love. On the contrary, it was about pure love, which if u dont care of it it will desapair as u said, but it(true love) can last forever
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if we say true love or pure love that will include all things which make love lasting for ever,,caring, sacrificing and other things..so don't try to make me convinced in ur idea...
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:P i wont say anything else because i think we will end in a boxing ring, don't u think so?
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take it easy kids
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no Sweets :) i dont think im a kid, maybe Shakespear hasn't matured :D... we can not agree with this topic
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Well written)
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its one of the bullets which u got from argumentsLara wrote:maybe Shakespear hasn't matured
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shakespear wrote:Lara wrote:maybe Shakespear hasn't matured
its one of the bullets which u got from arguments
Hi everybody specially to Shakespear!!!, i wanna u know i dint say that as an offensive term, ok , im sorry if u felt insulted, defenitly i learned according to culture, thoungts people do not catch things as we want they capture.
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thanks friend 4 this and i hope u happiness and pleasure in ur life
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Thank you!!! for u whish, i also wish u happiness and pleasure friend :)
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Hello Lara
Lovely poem..And i sure that you are in love...:)
Lovely poem..And i sure that you are in love...:)
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Hello!
Thanks so much for ur comment, but i think we dont need to be in love to write this kind of poem, what we need is romanticism.
And welcome to EC im sure u will enjoy it...have a nice day
Thanks so much for ur comment, but i think we dont need to be in love to write this kind of poem, what we need is romanticism.
And welcome to EC im sure u will enjoy it...have a nice day
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Lara..
you the best in writing poems
please show us some new poems you wrote
good luck
you the best in writing poems
please show us some new poems you wrote
good luck
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