Skies of fantasy

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Skies of fantasy

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2-10-09 Friday-------1:00
Skies of fantasy (سماوات الخيال)
I don't even know who I am, and where to.
You made me, forget my self, you're my balm.
It's a disaster, if I forget you.
You're my rest, my serenity, my calm.
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Even sleeping in a grave, the human doesn't die.
As long as there is someone, remembers him.
Beat me, hurt me, kill me, I won't say why.
But don't banish me away, at your whim.
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Sooner or later, all the masks will fall.
And you'll know that you've loved the enemies.
You're beautiful, but you're just a doll.
When I see you, I become 'n bad stymies.
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From that miserable distant place, I've come.
All the good men, one after one, fell dead.
I swim in skies of fantasy, I'm numb.
The mercy-angel had patted on my head.
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Don't forget me, or our past sweet moments.
Just remember, let me live in your mind.
Don't erase our memories, we live in scents.
Ah my lovely half, like you I can't find.
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in spite of date u wrote this one u remind me with one of my oddes(flowen coulds) but i did not publish it since u were not here

i guess u face alot and only u had was dreams to eacape through

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thnx 4 evey things
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:-D :-D :-D FANTASTIC :-D :-D :-D
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hello
thnx 4 ur comment
hope 2 try writings
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Hi
please send me your email
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hello
ok but not here koz its not allowed
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hello
farah i sent it
sorry if i was late
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hi
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shakespear wrote:It's a disaster, if I forget you.
It's hard to say i cant forget u, but then u dont realize when it happens, so it's not as hard as we have thouhgt... hmm, think about it
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real love won't let loyal lovers forget easily
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yeah it's not easy, that's what love causes... u r right
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that's well...we agree ...love is not easy..although its like candy in the beginning but when it grows it'll make many troubles to the lovers...it's like drug when we used to get it we can't stop...understood i think
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i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments
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shakespear wrote:2-10-09 Friday-------1:00
Skies of fantasy (سماوات الخيال)
I don't even know who I am, and where to.
You made me, forget my self, you're my balm.
It's a disaster, if I forget you.
You're my rest, my serenity, my calm.
---------------------------------
Even sleeping in a grave, the human doesn't die.
As long as there is someone, remembers him.
Beat me, hurt me, kill me, I won't say why.
But don't banish me away, at your whim.
---------------------------------
Sooner or later, all the masks will fall.
And you'll know that you've loved the enemies.
You're beautiful, but you're just a doll.
When I see you, I become 'n bad stymies.
---------------------------------
From that miserable distant place, I've come.
All the good men, one after one, fell dead.
I swim in skies of fantasy, I'm numb.
The mercy-angel had patted on my head.
---------------------------------
Don't forget me, or our past sweet moments.
Just remember, let me live in your mind.
Don't erase our memories, we live in scents.
Ah my lovely half, like you I can't find.

renew old peoms
our life is like a night mare
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