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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Sun Feb 17, 2008 7:04 am

Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P

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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:33 am

Hi everone . denvinbo can read my thoughts .
our life is like a night mare

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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:22 am

Hi . We have to write what feel ,haven`t we?
our life is like a night mare

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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Wed May 14, 2008 8:36 am

Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it,aren`t we?????
Bye
our life is like a night mare

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Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:52 pm

Krisi wrote:Shakespear, I honestly sympathise with you. Is it not a torture to be reminded of such pain...everytime you write? Hmm, just don't forget to breathe... :P
This is the reason why I asked you if you feel what you write... Usually one look for ways to make themselves happy (unless asked) but you're different...anyway, it's you're life... :P

once kirisi said that.
i think we must from time to time remove our hearts from sadness.
i think so
maybe i am wrong but i feel we`d all better do
good luck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:08 am

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: poem

Postby farah » Sun Mar 01, 2009 10:03 am

suffering from woman again
we have to live our life freely

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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:12 pm

sorry
i didn't see this comment
thnx

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Postby shakespear » Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:13 pm

lovepoetry wrote:find poem in here http://www.learnenglishabc.org

thanx 4 this site
have nice moments

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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:51 am

hi

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Re: poem

Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:04 am

hmm are u talking about a person who was indifferent with u?
or is it about anyone who was deluded?
i think it's about indifference am i rigt?

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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Wed Sep 14, 2011 2:21 am

crocodile Tears ....written by me


I'll go away for ever more
From you I got only pain
You don't care for my groan
Tears on cheeks are like rain
I'll leave and you will see
That I'll take the first train

* * *
Lament. . Lament crocodile Tears
Can't utterly persuade me
Don't you remember past days?
Together we were at the sea
Thence you swore to me
That your love I'll be

* * *
Your conceit is lovely thing
Look at me I became thin
You know you `re full of guilt
And god won't forgive your sin
Our love has become fight
In this fight you must win

as u said its about indifference ...u expressed it correctly

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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:23 am

http://www.learnenglishabc.org

i ddn;t see this site
dd anyone see this site


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