Add your poems, essays and short stories here. Please do not post work by other writers.
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shokin
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by shokin » Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:33 pm
Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I don't know ! I'm crazy !
Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I'm lucky ! I'm happy !
(yes, very short

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Shokin
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by Hardi » Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:53 pm
Yes very nice, but u could shorten it even more. Just say "I'm shokin!"

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by babara » Sun Dec 24, 2006 3:13 pm
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shokin
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by Lara » Sun Oct 16, 2011 5:13 pm
either you cry or laugh
not both
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by shakespear » Tue Oct 18, 2011 6:13 am
shokin wrote:Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I don't know ! I'm crazy !
Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I'm lucky ! I'm happy !
(yes, very short

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Shokin
my friend shokin i like this short poems and i think i can make it long but its urs and i dont wana trespass ur poems
..... congratulations
go ahead and do like this but try to make it long i think u have the talent
thnx