Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?

shokin · Post by **shokin** » Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:33 pm

Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I don't know ! I'm crazy !

Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I'm lucky ! I'm happy !

(yes, very short

)

Shokin

Hardi · Post by **Hardi** » Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:53 pm

Yes very nice, but u could shorten it even more. Just say "I'm shokin!"

babara · Post by **babara** » Sun Dec 24, 2006 3:13 pm

Hardi wrote:Yes very nice, but u could shorten it even more. Just say "I'm shokin!"

shokin · Post by **shokin** » Sun Dec 24, 2006 3:28 pm

Shokin

Vega · Post by **Vega** » Mon Dec 25, 2006 9:25 am

Lara · Post by **Lara** » Sun Oct 16, 2011 5:13 pm

either you cry or laugh not both

shakespear · Post by **shakespear** » Tue Oct 18, 2011 6:13 am

shokin wrote:Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I don't know ! I'm crazy !

Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I'm lucky ! I'm happy !

(yes, very short )

Shokin

my friend shokin i like this short poems and i think i can make it long but its urs and i dont wana trespass ur poems
..... congratulations
go ahead and do like this but try to make it long i think u have the talent
thnx

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