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Weak Heart

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Weak Heart

Every time you love someone I cry
You love again and again and they hurt you
Every day you remind me, tell me why
Stop loving him, I did it and hope you too

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If my mind refuses him, you cry for him
You scare me, you make me doubt
Don’t love, it’s better for us; it’s your whim
Heart, you filled my mind of drought

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Love is a bitter taste I don’t want to relish
Heart; you see! You are my downfall
You made me lose my senses, don’t be selfish
If I love again, it’s your blame, I’m not a doll

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Im sorry if i have grammar mistakes :-D
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Lara wrote:Love is a bitter taste I don’t want to relish
Heart; you see! You are my downfall
at last i found sth good, it's lovely poem and i think it expresses sth hidden...it's like a struggle between mind and heart....heart desires but mind advises and not carries away with this desire....
really it's good poem and its idea is new as i think
have nice moments....
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shakespear wrote:it's like a struggle between mind and heart....heart desires but mind advises and not carries away with this desire....


HI Shakes
Right, mind and heart don't agree, it's hard to understand those feelings, and i think this happens in real life. thanks for ur comment c u :-)
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hi
congratulations
u wrote lovely poem with rhyme and u r always welcome
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Thanks :-D shakes, u r a nice friend :)
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u too
and all my friends here in this club r so nice ....so i hope lovely days and moments to all my friends
my friend lara no need to thank me koz u deserve praise on this perfect piece of poetry....
any way u r welcome in anytime...
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have nice moments u too c u :-D
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hi friend
plz enrich us with new poem of ur lovely poems
we're waiting 4 u to do that
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Hello Shakes, thanks so much, im trying to start a new one :roll: then, maybe i show it to you all next year, i ask God for inspiration, and i hope so soon
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hi...we entered the new year but nothing till now....be aware we r all waiting ur new poem or may be u ddn't get the inspiration till now???
have nice year to u and to all my friends in this club
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I have just read ur poems i have a especial feeling, may be it is true in my sittuation, try to let us pass wonderful like this again.
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Hello Redheart, Welcome to EC, thank you so much, :-) hope you also share anything to us, see you
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really it's so nice piece of poetry....
it's strong in idea, words, expressions...i think it's perfect
LARA: we need another poem like this and as strong as this poem, as u promised to show us new poem, may b ur new poem will inspire me to write sth...
have nice moments
our life is like a night mare
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i think there's a real talent
our life is like a night mare
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