Raindrops dancing from a clear sky
Rays of the Sun piercing through the storm
Threads of Rainbows on a windy day
A tiny speck of Snowflake is born
Towering Sicamours reaching high
Grasping moss on walls of life
With blinking stars pasted on the heavens
And the moon peaking from telescopic lenses
Gathering all these and so much more
How does life actually begin
Does it end because we want it to
Or will it disappear on its own
Enjoy it if you can
Don't be bothered by these pains
There are always choices to take
May it be for the good/bad
Whatever you keep
Hold on tight
Never regret it 'til you die
For choices are made not to make
you bitter but better........
TEARS IN MY LIFE
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Re: TEARS IN MY LIFE
Hello, Rizza, Welcome, thanks for sharing ur poem. I like the way you wrote this poem. It is exactly what i wanned to see, it was great specially this stanza :
Thanks again
rizza wrote:Raindrops dancing from a clear sky
Rays of the Sun piercing through the storm
Threads of Rainbows on a windy day
A tiny speck of Snowflake is born
Thanks again
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Re: TEARS IN MY LIFE
The way of writing is really nice.. Very nice poem you shared..
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Re: TEARS IN MY LIFE
how didn't i see this great poem...i wana say i'm sorry koz i didn't comment on this poem in its time...in this poem i feel some deep meanings and views...specially previous stanza ...i dont know ...but i liked it so much...any way i'm here wana greet our friend for writing and issuing so lovely poem...rizza wrote:Gathering all these and so much more
How does life actually begin
Does it end because we want it to
Or will it disappear on its own
congratulations...