Vision Statement

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hengncb
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Vision Statement

Postby hengncb » Wed Oct 10, 2012 4:28 am

Is the following vision statement grammatically perfect?

"To be the premier one-stop engineering agency for the planning, development and maintenance of all public infrastructure and building facilities ... "


Is it an improvement if I rewrite it as follows?

"To be the premier one-stop engineering agency for the planning, developing, and maintaining of all public infrastructure and building facilities ... "

EnglishFix
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Re: Vision Statement

Postby EnglishFix » Fri Jul 05, 2013 12:58 am

The first one.


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