A ROSE & A HELL

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby farah » Wed May 07, 2014 5:18 pm

Hello
How did you say first no game then you said there is a game ... In the last line?
It's my idea
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Thu May 08, 2014 7:13 am

dreamer wrote:no words to say
no games to play
no words to say but i'm sure there are games to play

hi farah:
did u mean these 2 lines?? ok may be u r r8 but the poet can do what others can't..this called in literature" poetic license" ...any way it's ur opinioin
but my opinion is: we have to write and write whatever comes to our mind...we have to translate our ideas to lines of poems...and show the other what we want to say in poetic writing...
dear friend dreamer:
i think u r able to write wtever u want...u can make all ur speech poetry... really i think u r the best in this club....koz u have soft sense
finally: thanks farah to show ur comment frankly
........... thanks dreamer to accept all opinion and comments
.......... thanks all my friends in this club to edure my long comments


all have nice moments.........warm kisses
our life is like a night mare

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby farah » Thu May 08, 2014 9:25 pm

Waw.. How can this happen? If you agree I am not agree. But thank you to teach us the term(poetic licens) SHKIE... Have sweet dream my s......... FRIEND
we have to live our life freely

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Fri May 09, 2014 7:58 am

well it's not a matter to agree or not it's just we post what's going in ur mind at this moment

u might see some
antinomy in my lines it's just i post directly according to my mood that all farah


cu around and waiting to share us in our game

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Fri May 09, 2014 5:32 pm

Hi farsh.. We all respect ur opinion but in return we wish others respect our opinions,
u r thanked 2show our wrongs 2b corrected in future.. Have nice day
our life is like a night mare

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby farah » Mon May 12, 2014 10:45 am

Hi shakie... Thank you... I respect your opinion...bye my lovely friends
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Sun May 25, 2014 7:34 am

Hi farah.. Thnx
plz dont send me seducing words like" lovely or sweet etc" anyway thnxxxx
do u hv bf?
Im waitinv ur reply...
our life is like a night mare

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby Olagora » Thu Apr 09, 2015 5:42 am

it's not hard to find one but the hard is to search well and ur too lazy to do that search


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