Is it correct?
Alice, next appeared to has been a news photographer, not an amateur one.
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Re: Present Perfect
There are several problems with your sentence and it is difficult to understand your exact meaning.
However, we can say with certainty that "to has been" is not possible, and should probably be "to have been".
After that, I have these doubts:
Why a comma after Alive?
What is the exact meaning of next?
Why appeared and not appears?
However, we can say with certainty that "to has been" is not possible, and should probably be "to have been".
After that, I have these doubts:
Why a comma after Alive?
What is the exact meaning of next?
Why appeared and not appears?
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Re: Present Perfect
Comma after Alice as I want the reader does a slight pause.
E.g. : Alice first had introduced herself an amateur photographer. But, next it's revealed she is not.
She appeared the one who has been a news photographer basically.
E.g. : Alice first had introduced herself an amateur photographer. But, next it's revealed she is not.
She appeared the one who has been a news photographer basically.
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Re: Present Perfect
I’m still confused but perhaps it could be:
Next, Alice appeared to have been a news photographer, not an amateur one.
Next, Alice appeared to have been a news photographer, not an amateur one.
"We are not wholly bad or good, who live our lives under Milk Wood :-| " — Dylan Thomas, Under Milk Wood
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