If a complete sentence is to be presented as a slogan in two lines, which of the following is better?
Take note of the requirements
For transiting with a EU passport
or
Take note of the requirements for
Transiting with a EU passport
Also, is the first word of every line always capitalized?
Slogan writing
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ThomasCrockett
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Re: Slogan writing
"Take note of the requirements
For transiting with an EU passport"
This is the stronger option for a slogan.
"Take note of the requirements for
Transiting with an EU passport"
While grammatically correct, this option is slightly less effective
For transiting with an EU passport"
This is the stronger option for a slogan.
"Take note of the requirements for
Transiting with an EU passport"
While grammatically correct, this option is slightly less effective
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Brave
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Re: Slogan writing
I agree with TC.
Even better:
"Please take note of the requirements
For transiting with an EU passport"
Also note that TC correctly corrected your "a EU passport"
to "an EU passport"
Otherwise write it out in full:
"a European Union passport"
Even better:
"Please take note of the requirements
For transiting with an EU passport"
Also note that TC correctly corrected your "a EU passport"
to "an EU passport" Otherwise write it out in full:
"a European Union passport"