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Post by Brahman » Wed Mar 20, 2013 2:24 pm

Are the following sentences grammatical?

"Overseas bookings will also be posted, although if the booking is made three weeks before the performance the tickets will be held at the Ticket Office for collection. If you wish to collect tickets from the Ticket Office please select the below box."

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Re: A Notice

Post by Alan » Thu Mar 21, 2013 4:40 am

-->Overseas bookings will also be posted, although, if the booking is made three weeks before the performance, the tickets will be held at the Ticket Office for collection. If you wish to collect tickets from the Ticket Office, please select the box below."

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