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r u there? y don't u reply and make ur role??????????????
i'm waiting
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I wanna fly over there
I wanna fly heigh oh dear
Where Things get small
Where no at worries all
I wanna fly let me go
Leave my hand let me go
IWanna fly over there
be urself
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don't leave me alone, take me with you
my soul with you will leave me too
my soul's your slave, you slaved me
so don't leave me, with you i want to be
take me far, take me high
let me touch you, hear your sigh
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i wrote my role .........now it's urs...........i'm waiting
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don't leave me alone, take me with you
my soul with you will leave me too
my soul's your slave, you slaved me
so don't leave me, with you i want to be
take me far, take me high
let me touch you, hear your sigh


these r my last lines ...so wr r ur lines??????????????
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sooner or later,all friends will quit
in my place alone i'll sit
why do all bad ideas come
all friends leave, i can't find some
you are my lone friend
your leave is my end
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i'm here my special friend
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look around raise your hand to them
you are not alone and that's not the end
life is full don't be dull
it's not only shades it's colorful
remove dark shades catch my hand and come
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i see nothing, i see just dust
where are my friends, where's their lust
i can see your shadow, it's so sad
i'm yours, i'm not bad
for years, you try to vanish the sigh
you want to be lost in my eye
i fly with you, i fly and fly
i caught your hand, you took me so high
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take my hand follow me
you will see what i see
i see new world new life
take breathe and show me your best
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y always do you win?
y always do u show me my sin?
I shall follow u to the end
give me ur hand, your x, to me send
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think carefully my friend
no one winner we all have sins
just drop all behind don't even think
take my hand i'm waiting to come
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angels have no sins
you're clear, white like ice
sometimes a loser wins
but you're nice and will still nice
i hope you'll go to the dise
it's not chance, it's not dice
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why you're so black dear
days will shine don't see
i see your heart is like little star wait to appear
remove darkness of your heart and you'll see
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i can't remove it's sticked with me
and much shine, i can see
wars kill the hope the beam
i'm now far of the team
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close your eyes
don't think of time
fight for yourself ..for your dreams
war can't kill your soul can't kill dreams
close your eyes and tell me what can you see
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closing my eyes, i see your eyes
they take me far to those shinny stars
i stretch my hands, my soul flies-
you raise your hand to stop all wars
you shout loudly come with me
look at the sky, can't you see?
all the stars and the shinny moon
come and you'll be happy soon
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come with me
share me your dream
your soul is sweet lovely to be
remove past and say hello to life
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can u bear my problems?
how can i share you?
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sure i can trust me
be urself
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dreamer wrote:sure i can trust me
in spite of your mistake, i got it

my role:
she told me;you can trust me
don't hesitate, and you'll see
share me, come to my chest
i'm your fate, i'll follow you to west
share me your problems, come to my lap
have a rest, have some nap
come to me, i'm your fate,
your destiny,for you, i'll wait
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half of you half of me
we can fix what we see
life is waiting come on
don't miss the chance it comes once
i'm your fate your other face
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you are my eyes, my soul
you are my nose, my lips, my mole
you flow inside me, inside my vain
flow with my blood, take my brain
at mirror, i look, i see you
trying to kiss, i kiss who?


complete please
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kiss your soul
love yourself
accept who are sure you won't be in mess
time is passing to time to waste anymore
live your day with beautiful soul
be urself
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listen to my heart, it calls you
need to be with you, no fib it's true
come treat my wounds, relieve me
remove my troubles, take the key
let's travel far, to that lovely sea
with you, i like to live and see
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wr r u dreamer....no reply till now, it's ur role.......ok???
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dreamer wrote:kiss your soul
love yourself
accept who are sure you won't be in mess
time is passing to time to waste anymore
live your day with beautiful soul
YOU SAID THIS STANZA AND YOU STOPPED
I HOPE YOU COMPLETE
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be happy now no matter what
we found our ways even in buts
just hug me no promises no shuts

ur turn
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i hug you but i hug phantom
i kiss you but i kiss dust
are you alive? are you a tomb?
are you a stone? still you have lust?
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i feel i'm dead, lost my feel
no water, plants will die
your travel made me heel
you killed me when you said bye
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i hard could write these lines..i hope in future we can get our old talent.
you have one mistake" shut" can't take "s" plural koz it's adjective here.
YOUR ROLE.....
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omg still correcting my mistakes till now

you are the one who said bye
you reject me without deny
you never accept me in the way i like
you wanna me statue without cries
be urself
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