extra marital affairs

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sigmou
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extra marital affairs

Post by sigmou » Tue Mar 19, 2019 10:00 pm

MEETING IN THE NIGHT
HE TOSSED OFF HIS RING;
THEN TOOK TO THE STREETS.
THOUGH HE LOOKED GREEN,
HIS HEART WAS MEAN.

A WHITE SHIRT HE WORE;
AND BLACK JEANS FOR SURE.
HE ROAMED ROUND THE WORLD;
THEN MET A LITTLE WHORE.

HER DRESS WAS A MESS,
I GUESS SHE CARED NOT
FOR OUT WERE HER BREASTS
AND ALL SHE GOT.

WITH A WATERY MOUTH
HE SHOUTED WOW
AND LEAPED INTO HER DEN,
THAT WAS THE END. BY: S.J ANNE

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Re: extra marital affairs

Post by reedus » Mon Apr 01, 2019 7:04 pm

Your poem sound good. Reading and writing own stories and poems helps me to improve English skills. Few weeks ago I wrote my poem and published it on one site for writers. Two days later I found that it was published on anotjer site under another author's name. Plagiarism also well- known problem in wrtitng essays. I prefer to write essays by my own or use help of essay writing services .

sigmou
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Re: extra marital affairs

Post by sigmou » Tue Apr 02, 2019 10:45 am

Thanks dear . I am glad you appreciate it.

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Re: extra marital affairs

Post by MazharCh » Tue Feb 25, 2020 10:50 am

:roll: Poem is a great work, simple and colorful expression. Common happenings in the lives of materialistic lovers are beautifully presented. Rhyme and tone is really good. Typical masculine traits are wonderfully portrayed. Presence and inevitability of female in one or the other firm, shape or tone is displaying strong feminist concerns.

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